Paula Goldsmith Poet Rictameter

Hopes of Spring's Return

Again
with snow on me
I awake from my sleep
the warmth from the big yellow sun
brings pretty flowers peeking their heads out
birds start to sing joy to the world
squirrels scamper quickly
springtime is here
again



Date Written:1/17/2023 

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Marikate Kingston February 1, 2023 at 10:28 PM A daffodil could be reading your poem. He sounds so peaceful and happy. Everything around him feeling his anticipation. Your writing is always so much fun to read Paula. I'm glad to have found this delightful, happy poem. Paula Goldsmith February 2, 2023 at 9:31 AM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you find my writes fun to read. (Thanks) That made my day. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.................

Len Gasun January 30, 2023 at 3:53 PM Big Congrats on your well-deserved first place win my dear friend Paula! You've painted a splendid and graceful beauty of the coming spring through your beautiful rictameter. I love it a lot and enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you always! Hugs Paula Goldsmith January 31, 2023 at 12:25 PM Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you love/enjoyed this write. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away with hugs...............

Janice Canerdy January 29, 2023 at 3:33 PM A HUGE congrats, Paula! Janice Paula Goldsmith January 29, 2023 at 3:39 PM Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed this one. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away...............

Andrea Dietrich January 28, 2023 at 3:12 PM this is so nice and has a personal touch. Congrats on your great win. Paula Goldsmith January 29, 2023 at 10:30 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my Rictameter write. Have a wonderful/blessed weekend writing away...............

Ann Peck January 28, 2023 at 12:37 PM Beautiful, Paula! Many congratulations! Paula Goldsmith January 28, 2023 at 1:32 PM Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed this fun write. Have a wonderful/blessed weekend writing away...............

Evelyn Judy Buehler January 28, 2023 at 11:15 AM 'birds start to sing joy to the world' Lovely scenes grace this charming rictameter, Paula. Warmest congratulations on your win. ;) Paula Goldsmith January 28, 2023 at 1:31 PM Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this write. Spring will be here soon with birds singing. Have a wonderful/blessed weekend writing away...............

Linda Alice Fowler January 28, 2023 at 6:42 AM Soft and sweet Paula. Congratulations on your win! :) Paula Goldsmith January 28, 2023 at 6:45 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my spring write. I enjoyed writing it. Pretty spring will be here soon. Hooray!!! Have a wonderful/blessed~~day/weekend writing away...............

Valsa George January 27, 2023 at 7:52 PM Beautiful poem depicting the change from winter to spring. Congratulations Paula on your first place win.... Paula Goldsmith January 28, 2023 at 6:42 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this winter to spring write. Winter will be over soon then pretty spring. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away...............

William Kelii Kekaula January 27, 2023 at 1:20 PM A beautiful transition of the seasons, Paula, with my compliments on your 1st Place win, Aloha William Paula Goldsmith January 28, 2023 at 6:41 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my Spring write. Spring will be here soon. Guess you have it around the year. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away...............

Jennifer Proxenos January 19, 2023 at 10:58 PM Spring the rebirth of beautiful plant life, and happy warmer days that Spring allows us to enjoy Great Rictameter well penned dear friend. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer. Paula Goldsmith January 20, 2023 at 7:18 AM Thank You for reading/writing. Yes, Spring is a time for the rebirth of life. Wake Up Spring. Hugs. Have a wonderful/blessed day............

Joanna Daniel January 18, 2023 at 10:27 PM Very well written, Paula:) time to wake up:) Paula Goldsmith January 19, 2023 at 12:22 PM Thank You for reading/writing. Spring will be here before we know it. Wake Up Spring. Have a wonderful/blessed day............

Jenna Logan January 18, 2023 at 9:50 AM It'll be here giving all the warmth of glorious spring days before you know it, Paula. Good wishes for the contest. Paula Goldsmith January 18, 2023 at 10:13 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your good wishes. I love Spring. Yes, it will be here before we know it. Have a wonderful/blessed day............

Anne-Lise Andresen January 18, 2023 at 8:01 AM - Spring is the best time of the year ... I look forward to it - Lovely poem, good luck in the contest :) - hugs Paula Goldsmith January 18, 2023 at 10:06 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your good luck. I also look forward to Spring. I love that time of the year. Hugs... Catch Them... Have a wonderful/blessed day............

Panagiota Romios January 17, 2023 at 5:58 PM It will come back, Paula! Spring just needed a vacation, like we do! My best wishes inthe contest. Panagiota Paula Goldsmith January 18, 2023 at 10:03 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Yes, Spring needs a vacation each year. So true. Have a wonderful/blessed day............

Michael Tor January 17, 2023 at 2:32 PM How I wish my dear How I wish. lol Paula Goldsmith January 18, 2023 at 9:56 AM Thank You for reading/writing. Keep wishing and your wishes will come true very soon. I love Spring time. Guess you have had a lot of snow. Stay warm. Have a wonderful/blessed day............

Sotto Poet January 17, 2023 at 12:13 PM You penned a fine Rictameter, Paula. I can't wait for spring to come. Your imagery is wonderful. Check Soupmail Paula Goldsmith January 18, 2023 at 9:53 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your kind words. Glad you like my write. I did Soupmail you. Have a wonderful/blessed day............

Kim Rodrigues January 17, 2023 at 10:19 AM pretty flowers peeking their heads out…love it! Paula Goldsmith January 18, 2023 at 9:51 AM Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you love this write. Have a wonderful/blessed day............