Hope's Glimmer

It should not have surprised me when I woke,
laying in the hospital bed, white sheets,
bandages, heart monitor, IV yoke,
nurses, and three empty visitor seats.
Psychiatrists asked questions, prescribed pills,
forced meetings, demanded group therapy,
attempted to find the root of my ills,
declared depression, and then set me free.

It did not surprise me when I came home,
to find it still broken, empty, and bare.
Laundry still piled in a haphazard dome,
and proof of collapse pervaded the air.
I failed in life and also failed in death.
There must be a reason I still have breath.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 6:48 AM
Congratulations on your win in Richard's "Suicide Survivor" contest Brittany. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 5:05 PM
Brittany, congratulations with your wonderful win,,, , enjoyed stopping by once again ;-)~ Hope you are having a joyous holiday. Take care ~PD
Sefunmi Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 6:17 AM
Yes, we all have reasons for the breath of life within us. Congrats on your win!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 12:46 PM
Strong words but sad and congratulations on your place in the contest xx
Falotico Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 3:49 PM
Strong piece and I echo the words below me. You are never alone. Hugs Michael
Ersal Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 12:43 PM
Hopefully,it's not you who went through all that was told in the poem. Even if it is, glad you found out the hope...Also you are not the only one!
Reynolds Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 3:48 PM
I'm glad you liked the poem. I'm not the speaker in this piece, although I have known people who had similar situations.
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