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Hopeful Hot Wheels

Deserted we lie, banished to a shoe box; discarded metal scraping metal every spring as our ignored box gets shelved in a different room of the house; forsaken and further away from real life. We demand equal time with your mobile phone games, your Netflix programs, and your facebook videos! We are your neglected Hot Wheels cars. Pick us up and let's play a while... bright colors, mag wheels, cool decals, no need to charge batteries or download an app, just four wheels and a hood that opens and closes. Vintage VW's, Oldsmobiles, Dodge muscle cars, Indy 500 speedsters, futuristic dream cars rejected by car companies (but don't we still look cool after all these years?) Let's go for a cruise down the Main Street of your living room table or race down the autobahn of your hallway or explore the Amazon jungle out in your backyard (just remember not to track any mud into the house!) Find those forgotten bright orange tracks you jettisoned in the attic and go invite your neighbors over for a "race of the century", followed by a glass of cold milk. Draw some streets on butcher paper and pretend to be the mayor of a small town, populated by Indy Eagles, Silhouettes, Red Barons, Custom Firebirds, Paddy Wagons, Classic '36 Ford Coupes (with rumble seat), Chevy Camaros, Roadsters, Lotus Turbines, Deoras (with surfboards), Custom Eldorados, and you.
Hot Wheels (TM) is a trademark of Mattel Inc.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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La France Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 7:43 PM
John, congratulations on your win in my abandon contest with this wonderfully penned poem _Constance
Deepa Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 1:13 PM
Hello sir, Trace of memories ran through my mind as I read this amazing work of yours.Enjoyed your creative soulful Muse.keep writing.Keep inspiring:-)Take care.Warm regards~Deepa.
Watt Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 7:12 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Deepa. I'm glad you could enjoy some memories from reading this. Stay well. Warm regards ~ John
Mishra Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 8:22 AM
This is creativity at its best John! I love the way you transformed this theme into something so subtle. I had a trip down the memory lane of my collection of cars when Netflix, video games, mobile phones did not even exist. It used to be sheer pleasure racing around in the house. Thank you for writing this brilliant piece. Congratulations on your win dear friend :) God bless you
Watt Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 11:06 AM
Thank you for sharing your childhood memories of collecting and racing cars. Those little wheels were great for building imaginations and keeping little hands busy! It was nice to receive this uplifting visit from you today, Aditi. May your week be blessed ~ John
Kauffman Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 12:47 AM
Back to say congratulations for your very unique and creative interpretation of freeverse. Take a base! Blessings!
Watt Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 1:21 AM
Thanks for the return, my friend! Call your sons over and we'll have some penny bet races... my 50-year-old Hot Wheels can still bring the heat! Blessings // John
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 3:00 PM
this is SO inventive, John. My hat is off to you for ORIGINALITY. I hope this one scored very high. I think I recall seeing your name on the winners list as I scanned it. So congratulations. Love this.
Watt Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 7:43 PM
My gratitude to you, dear friend, for always encouraging originality. You inspire me so much, and help me want to keep writing and come up with new ideas. Heartfelt thanks ~ John
Sietesantos Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 12:45 PM
What a fantastic trek through memory lane and the nostalgia you ignited with this piece! Thank you for this awesome tribute to now abandoned Hot Wheels classics! Beautifully and lovingly written with vivid, exciting imagery! Good luck in the contest! Hugs. Pandita
Watt Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 7:42 PM
I loved reading your enthusiastic comment today, Pandita! Made me feel very good. I hope your weekend is going very well. Many blessings and best wishes ~ John
Teagan Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 9:35 PM
I love your take on the theme of this challenge! Very nice, John! x
Watt Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 12:35 AM
Thank you kindly, my poet friend!
May Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 9:13 PM
Wow, Such classic cars, maybe it's time to dust of the tracks!, Well written John..
Watt Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 12:35 AM
I'll race you! Thank you Joseph, appreciate the visit.
Daniel Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 9:34 AM
Yeah! Those cars are sure becoming a name of the past.. well expressed, John:)
Watt Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 3:05 PM
Thanks for the kind visits today, Jo! I've been feeling a bit nostalgic lately, and it's coming out in my writing.
Mukherjee Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 12:14 PM
Your poem is absolutely mind blowing with such an innovative concept. Nowadays we have forgotten these simple pleasures as we have become slaves to the machine rhythm. My father has a couple of Hotwheel cars and other bike and car miniatures of 1/6 th scale. I love those and I think those are assets now.
Watt Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 12:47 PM
Thank you for your wonderful words of encouragement, Jhinuk. It's great to know of others who have enjoyed Hot Wheels. I'm glad he has saved them and values them.
Kauffman Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 6:38 PM
Oh what memories of our boys and their childhood collection of "Hot Wheels, " tracks set up all over the house and penny bets on races! Almost stepped on an abandoned car in the garage the other day. Made me think of those wonderful rainy days! Good luck in the contest, my friend! This poem really sings like a national anthem!
Watt Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 8:28 PM
In order to qualify as a boy in my neighborhood, you had to have Hot Wheels and baseball cards. Glad you didn't need a chiropractor visit after that near miss! Glad you got to see this today... it's strolling down Childhood Lane day! Thanks for the great comment, Sam
Cunningham Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 6:32 PM
Wow, that took me for a cruise down memory lane, still got mine in a box in the loft. My wife thinks they may be worth something. NOT FOR SALE, lol. Good luck in the contest John Tom
Watt Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 8:25 PM
Mine too, Tom. NOT FOR SALE! Too many memories, plus if I ever have grandkids...
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