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Hope Came One Day, Like a New Cool Spring Rain

Hope Came One Day, Like A New Cool Spring Rain Heartache deep, it was breaking granite stones sun eclipsed on that raging fateful day. He felt it, the blues down deep in his bones lost love hurts, love hurts, as they often say. She came on like lovely dancing whirlwind such awesome beauty in her raven hair. Becoming his hot lover and best friend now he finds her love lost is just not fair. He aching for days on that summer beach and beautiful visions of her deep joy. Her gone, life sought to miserably teach realization she was never his toy! Hope came one day, like a new cool Spring rain. Any broken heart can find love again! Robert J. Lindley, 10-30-2015 Poem Syllable Counter Results Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 Total # Syllables: 140 Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: Total # Words: 109

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Date: 10/30/2015 4:00:00 PM
such a lustrous soonet, robert...you bring me joy.. huggs
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Date: 10/30/2015 3:31:00 PM
Never take them for granted my friend. This is a great piece.
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