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A winged dream of bliss, pain a nightmare's child toil an echo past plenty a ripe kiss war unheard unmissed none want for food all have a roof deserts with rain oceans with fish room for all fires warm water blest thankful at peace hope

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Wilma Neels

Date: 1/31/2015 1:11:00 AM

Debbie, I really enjoyed enjoyed reading this inspiring write of you this morning. If only the world could be like this.. Hope your weekend is a great one ;)

Cona Adams

Date: 1/29/2015 12:38:00 PM

Debbie, I have read and enjoyed many of your poems today. This one is special. And, don't we wish?

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/29/2015 2:38:00 PM

Yes Cona I wish very much it was so.

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/19/2015 2:48:00 PM

I agree with Paul...this is top-notch! A #7 from me too !!

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/19/2015 3:30:00 PM

well, I musta done did something wrong for Ram it got an NA? Maybe syllable count?

Paul Callus

Date: 1/17/2015 9:29:00 AM

Hi Debbie! This is one of the best entries I have seen so far. We all hope for peace and love on earth. #7 Have a lovely weekend. // paul

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/16/2015 1:03:00 PM

I quite enjoyed this take on the contest, I hope to see this ranking high on the list.

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/16/2015 9:36:00 AM

I agree with our lovely friend Richard here. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/16/2015 9:03:00 AM

I like how you contrast dream and nightmare, it makes for an effective transition to hopeful images.

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 1/15/2015 8:10:00 PM

Hey, Sis, quick drop by. Like the imagery here... though, I gotta say "why a DV on a subject like this? It's like watching one of those award shows, and there is a classic actor, like Paul Newman, for example, about to win a life time achievement award and their drown him out during his speech, rush him off the stage, condense all that wit and wisdom into 20 seconds of airplay. GAW!!!" Now, you need punctuation. If you're saying, pain is a nightmare's child. It is: Pain, a nightmare's child...

Cyndi Macmillan
Date: 1/15/2015 8:15:00 PM

I'm guessing its, Pain, a nightmare's child/ Plenty, a ripe kiss ... Also suggesting something other than nightmare... the rest of man's misery is referred to in the past. You go from bliss to nightmare and back to only an echo ... I'd keep the positivity. xoxox

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/15/2015 4:47:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry..This is a good one..I like the picture chosen as well..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Sara

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/15/2015 3:50:00 AM

An exceptional poem about Hope. Good luck in the contest!

Ed Belcher

Date: 1/14/2015 12:47:00 PM

A very lovely world indeed. Very nice!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/14/2015 2:53:00 AM

What a wonderful word it would be Debbie:-) The image in the pic is superb to illustrate the positive feelings of hope in your excellent write. good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx a 7 from me

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/13/2015 9:33:00 PM

So true and beautifully worded.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/13/2015 8:36:00 PM

Very nice pen Debbie! Truly enjoyed your Hope in this form, dear friend.A 7 from me! Have a nice day! :) Love and hugs! xxoxoxx D.^0^

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/13/2015 8:29:00 PM

Debbie, such wonderful images of hope for a better world you express in your words. Beautiful...Sandra