Get Your Premium Membership

Honestly

HONESTLY do the throats of our wrists bare testimonies do we have thousands of clean cells to fall back on do we have to recover ourselves or wait for someone else… as dangerous questions ask do they hate me? do we sweat in rainless efforts watching as the weirdness evaporates… do we tick the acceptable boxes of their circumstances do we sing as brave drawn out strings symphonies of niches and clichés faint undulated paints of weakened watermarks honestly? © Kim van Breda—12 October 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/17/2015 3:39:00 PM
Very great poem, strong , word's really good job... I liked it... :)
Login to Reply
Date: 10/13/2015 6:29:00 PM
It's tough fitting in. There is a place for all of us when we do what we love. This poem of yours is unusual. Very enjoyable.
Login to Reply
Van Breda Avatar
Kim Van Breda
Date: 10/13/2015 8:18:00 PM
Thank you Duke for your visits to my poems. Your comments are encouraging and appreciated ~~X~~

Book: Reflection on the Important Things