Homeless Mans Love For His Daughter

A homeless man played his guitar,
for coin rewards put in a jar.
 A lonely life he always led,
but in his heart a love he had.
 This love he thought of all the time,
 during the cold days brought sunshine.
 His songs were of a girl he loved,
he sang to her, with stars above.
 So many years had gone on by,
but in his heart, and reasons why.
 There was this hope that would not die,
the thought of her just made him cry.
 

Dedicated to my 
daughter Ashley...
 
Michael Tor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ortiz Avatar
December 28, 2024 at 2:15 AM
it is sad to see this happening more and more. Nicely written poem.
Read Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 10:31 AM
Sadly it's become more prevalent now days, there are many homeless people on the streets of London sad times.
Tor Avatar
November 21, 2024 at 4:18 PM
Very sad times John. Thanks for the visit my friend...
Williams Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 1:48 AM
A beautiful expression of love from a devoted father....Hugs Michael.
Macfarlane Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 1:42 PM
Micheal, a lovely dedication that shows the tender love that you have for your daughter. Beautiful poem. Hugs
Tor Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 1:12 AM
Hugs Cecilia. Thank you for your caring thoughts.
Kendrick Avatar
February 26, 2024 at 7:34 AM
What seems separated can be restored. I hope that restoration happens that is if that is what this is about. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Tor Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 1:11 AM
It was a pleasure to read your Poetry as always...
Rodrigues Avatar
February 25, 2024 at 5:47 AM
I pray you find that close relationship with your daughter. I was closer to my mom but since she has died I have grown closer to my dad…tears. May Ashley find a song in her heart, a warm feeling at the thought of her dad. God bless!
Tor Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 1:10 AM
Thank you Kim for the kind words.
George Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 10:23 PM
This is a beautiful dedication to your daughter that will definitely make her understand how deep is your love for her. Though homeless the father here owns a great treasure, his daughter for whom he has boundless love. In the eyes of the world, he is a homeless person, but in some other ways, he is richer than many. Beautiful poem. So happy to see you back again, dear Michael
Tor Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 1:09 AM
Thank you Valsa, happy to see you...
Dietrich Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 8:28 PM
Hey, what did you write me? Nothing comes up in Soupmail when I try to open your mail. Maybe because you did not put a subject in the top line???
Tor Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 1:09 AM
I will re write it for you Andrea.
Rodgers Avatar
December 14, 2023 at 5:41 PM
Michael your poem is a touching and heartfelt piece that captures the essence of love and hope. The imagery and emotions conveyed through the words are truly captivating and heartwarming. Well done, Michael! -Blessings, Daniel
Tor Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 6:52 PM
Daniel thank you so much for your kind words and perspective. Sending God's love back to you...
Cunningham Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 5:36 AM
What a lovely dedication to your daughter, quite an emotional write Michael. I hope you are keeping well. Tom
Tor Avatar
December 12, 2023 at 7:18 PM
Thank you Dear Tom your kind words mean so much. God bless you... and heal you...
Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 12:59 AM
This is so beautiful. How did I never see it? Hey, I am wondering what's up with you, and I can not see any activity from you here for over a month now. Are you ok? Please let me know!!
Dietrich Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 10:08 AM
Thanks. Just now seeing this.
Tor Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 12:44 AM
Hi Andrea sorry for the late response. I am OK miss all of you. I am taking a little break. Catching up on my home, just involved in my side business and just taking a little vacation. I'm feeling better miss my Poetry Soup extended family apologize for not letting my favorite Poets of my time off. Andrea I pray you are doing better or at least well. I have been doing a tremendous amount of research so much to share. It is always nice to see your smile. Hope you and your husband Joe are doing well. God bless you.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 1:17 PM
A lovely write. Have not seen you. Are you OK??? In Sept, I took 3 weeks off from the computer. Burned Out... Have a very blessed day............
Tor Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 12:46 AM
Hi Paula , I did the same took sometime off to do research and read some books and catch up on my home. I and a friend put a metal roof on the garage, and now I am going to start working on the floor. It never ends when you own a house, so sorry for the late response.
Maverick Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 2:52 AM
A most heartfelt accounting Michael..For me it Highlights thingss that have affected someone so much A chain of events is put in motion.' Although in The worlds scheme ( they may appear small ) Yet we can carry them for decades.' Often the Fallout for others is punative..Yet God can turn Things around.' Though the euphrates drys up Prayers will ever be flowing ' God bless
Tor Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 12:47 AM
Hey Joe sorry for late response my friend. Thank you for your comment I surely agree with you, hope everything is well. God bless you, took some time off.
Legros Kelley Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 4:37 PM
Michael, how incredibly beautiful. How blessed to be the recipient of such loving thought, a loving poem, and the love and prayers of an adoring dad. This is a fave. God bless you.
Tor Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 12:18 PM
BJ thank you again. I appreciate you so much and sorry for the late response...
Jones Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 2:10 PM
So beautiful and so touching that your daughter inspired.
Tor Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 12:17 PM
Thank you Karen and I am sorry for late response.
Lawrence Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 9:46 AM
Deeply lovely ...kind and generous as is your heart dear Michael. Big hugs and blessings, Susan :)
Tor Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 12:16 PM
Thank you Susan sorry for late response...
Poetry Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 10:19 AM
Beautiful
Tor Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 12:16 PM
Thank you so much...
Kaur Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 9:33 PM
God, it was quite emotional. Beautifully written.
Tor Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 12:15 PM
Thank you Harveen sorry for late response...
Baker Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 2:45 PM
A FAV for my list, Michael. Very touching, Michael. Though have never lived very close since college, I love my daughters so much it hurts to be separated by miles and means. All I can do is Love and pray. Your heartful thoughts touched my heart today, my friend. Blessing, Bill
Tor Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 12:15 PM
Thanks Bill sorry for late response. God bless you...
Lamoureux Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 6:17 AM
Simple and eloquent.
Tor Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 12:14 PM
Thank you Richard sorry for late response...
Canerdy Avatar
September 1, 2023 at 6:51 AM
Michael, this is a lovely, deeply expressive poem about the unique love of father for daughter. Janice
Tor Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 12:37 AM
Thank you so much Janice...
Roper Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 11:24 AM
A fathers love never dies even in passing a guardian angel. Love the inspiring dedication my friend.
Tor Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 11:09 PM
Thank you Eve for your support. God bless you...
Poet Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 8:17 AM
Dear Michael, your dedication poem for your kid is simply outstanding. It beautifully expresses the intensity of your feelings for her. A father's love for his daughter, like the songs that pour from your guitar, sustains her even in times of scarcity. This familial bond's strength is simply amazing! Your poetry elicits a deep emotional response from any father who adores his darling daughter, Michael.
Tor Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 11:09 PM
Lasaad your thoughts on this poem are spot on my friend. All that you said is what I wanted to convey. Thank you so much for your valued opinion, I always look forward to reading your comments. Blessings your way my friend...
Lindley Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 6:50 AM
A truly brilliant dedication poem my good friend. Your immense love for your daughter brilliantly shows. A gem and fav too. God bless you.
Tor Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 11:06 PM
Thank you Robert for your kind support. A true friend you are...
Anaya Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 8:07 PM
More poets should give the gift of dedicating to their daughters, what they do best...poetry! That, Micheal was my favorite part! Faving. Xhugs
Tor Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 11:05 PM
Thank you Anaya so right you are daughters deserve more dedications. Thanks for stopping by...
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