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Across the sky, the wisps of dawn appear To close a rendezvous that may not last, While gentle words in silken phrases smear The hemline of nightfall as you depart: For duty of war slits my forlorn heart Rendering eves needled as a pierce dart. Should faith bring you home; remember the time When sunsets lounge in field of glittered rays Bequeathing a vow ...a union sublime Igniting the dance of rapture which portrays The blooming morns where devotion obeys A nourishment ripe through heavenly ways. Yes, I shall wait for you by the riverside Until our breaths meet, no shadow could hold This autumn, next summer, all cycles tied Entrusting moonlit prayers to unfold Sweetness of a return from battles cold, That angels guide you home, a joy extolled-- Affirming strength of this love, so daring Despite time’s ploy, our hope unwavering. 1/31/2018 Contest of Laura Loo: Urban Sonnet

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Date: 3/5/2018 11:00:00 AM
A lyrical, romantic poem with touching memorable phrases, and pleasing rhyme.
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Date: 2/21/2018 9:37:00 AM
Sweet Nette, I loved this poem from the very second I read it. Loved every word, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 2/20/2018 11:22:00 AM
Wonderful rhythm and pace Nette, congratulations...
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Date: 2/20/2018 9:27:00 AM
Superb. Congrats on your win, nette.
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Date: 1/31/2018 8:08:00 AM
This one has me swooning. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/30/2018 10:38:00 PM
Your composition has reached on excellence. WONDERFUL! Congrats n Love.
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Date: 1/30/2018 6:39:00 PM
Written with your usual awesome style, the sonnet rhymes wonderfully.. a splendid poem..best for a win, nette.
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Date: 1/30/2018 5:40:00 PM
So beautiful and moving, Nette! Janice
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Date: 1/30/2018 5:33:00 PM
Well written Nette. I love the last stanza :)
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Date: 1/30/2018 2:48:00 PM
Hi nette: I'M IN AWE OF THIS POEM AND EACH LINE LEAVES ME BREATHLESS!
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Date: 1/30/2018 1:57:00 PM
When we believe without a shadow of a doubt, miracles happen. An absorbing poem filled with longing and undulating word choices!
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Date: 1/30/2018 1:31:00 PM
I really like this one nette in its form and substance....good luck
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