Home Sweet Home

H ale lani is the name of our hillside home
O n top of the Waianae mountain range.
M enehunes were known to roam here, often
E nveloped by mysterious misty clouds.

S erenity dwells here now that our keiki have grown
W elcome they are when they return home on
E aster, Thanksgiving and Christmas holidays.
E veryone shares home cooked meals to celebrate.
T imbers grace our mountain's face overlooking the sea below.

H appiness abides because our mo'opuna wahine shares
O ur home. We cherish our growing 'ohana and those precious
M oments when our 'ohana is gathered together again.
E very sunrise I give thanks for our heavenly home.

1-3-16

Hale lani means 'heavenly home' in Hawaiian and is the
name given to our home.

Menehunes are the 'little magical people' of Hawaii 
similar to pixies or trolls. Click on the link to read about them.
http://www.mythicalrealm.com/creatures/menehune.html

keiki is the Hawaiian name for child or children
'ohana means family in Hawaiian
mo'opuna wahine means granddaughter in Hawaiian
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Callus Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 8:39 AM
When I win the lottery I will come and visit your Hale lani, Connie...it sounds like part of heaven! Home is sweet indeed when due importance is given to family. #7 ~ Warm regards & happy Valentine's Day! // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 3:06 AM
We have a guest room waiting for you Paul....but don't wait to win the lottery. : ) Thank you!
Hamilton Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 8:30 AM
Thanks Connie for your beautiful entry.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Thank you John, for my placement in your contest. I have enjoyed all the wonderful entries. Aloha, Connie
A   Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 12:51 PM
Thank you for the wonderful reply
Austin Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 3:09 PM
A beautiful language. Hard to imagine how wonderful it would be to grow up in such a paradise. Think of the wealth of Haiku one could write in such surroundings and with use of the language. No wonder you are so fresh and natural. Love, Dave
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February 11, 2016 at 12:40 PM
I didn't grow up here Daver. I grew up mostly in southern California. I came to live here after I met my husband in 1980. I agree with you about the beauty of the islands, they blend well with poetry. Thank you Daver. Love, Connie
Canerdy Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 9:24 AM
Connie, I really enjoy poems that not only are well-written but teach me some- thing. Yours fits that description. Congrats on your win. Janice
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 9:42 AM
Thank you very much Janice. You know how much I liked yours. This contest has so many wonderful entries.
Lane Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 5:44 AM
A very lovely acrostic, Connie. Thanks for the explanations of the words. I visited Hawaii years ago and the language is beautiful.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 9:40 AM
Thank you Lin. My mother in law spoke it fluently. My husband is Hawaiian and Chinese.
Roper Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 9:21 PM
Wonderful write, Connie!!! Congratulations on your "Home sweet home-Acrostic" win. :) Hugs, Eve
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 9:32 AM
Thank you Eve. I am enjoying all the entries. Hugs, Connie
Scars Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 8:25 PM
Connie, congrats o your placement in the contest!! *smiles* -luloo :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 9:37 AM
Thank you very much Luloo!
A   Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 7:01 PM
Connie, Congrats on your "Home sweet home-Acrostic" LINDA
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 9:30 AM
Thank you Linda. This contest has so many wonderful entries.xx
Haight Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 6:53 PM
Such a beautiful, heavenly home, Connie, and how well your lovely Acrostic presents it to us. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 9:28 AM
Thank you for such a nice comment Sandra. Hugs, Connie
Laurie Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 9:18 PM
G'day Connie ... another great poem from you Connie. I can feel the love and warmth - Lindsay
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 1:35 AM
Thank you Lindsay. I appreciate your comment. Cheers, Connie
La France Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 1:17 PM
Connie, oh so beautifully and wonderfully penned, what an awesome place to live, well done ~~
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 10:29 PM
Thank you Constance. I love it here. Thank you for your nice comment. Hugs, Connie
Beaufort Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 8:24 AM
A beautiful paradise it can be. The picture you chose has wind blown clouds which appear so heavenly. Ahh--just so lovely.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 10:37 PM
We are often in the clouds as we live at 1200 feet above sea level. We most always have wind too which I love. Thanks so much.
George   Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 3:55 AM
An absolutely beautiful Acrostic, Connie. It sounds like heaven to me. Elaine
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 10:40 PM
That is why I named our home Hale lani. The shool my kids went to is called Mauka lani. Heavenly mountain...very fitting. Thanks so much Elaine. Hugs, Connie
Turner Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 9:41 PM
This is a (nani) beautiful poem, Connie. Mahalo. Probably win you first place. Aloha A7
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 11:38 PM
What a sweet comment Daniel. I really appreciate your encouraging words. Thank you so much. Aloha, Connie
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 8:54 PM
this is a beautiful tribute not only to your home but to Hawaii also, Connie. sorry your childhood home was not that nice as you told me before. Mine was actually very filled with fighting. my mom and stepdad fought constantly. But we eight kids had such fun together, we were able to get past the bad relationship of my mom and stepdad.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 11:51 PM
I never want to move again. Thanks a lot for your nice comments on my poem Andie. You are so great at leaving comments. Love, Connie
Richards Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 7:51 PM
How fortunate you are dear Connie, to live in such a magical place. But even more important, as you know, the fortune truly comes with the family love that is evident in your poem. I'm so happy for you to have it all. :) Lovely poem!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 8:30 PM
We move around so much in my youth that I attended 15 different schools befoe i finished 9th grade. So I really appreciate having this home. Thank you Carrie. Hugs, Connie
Adams Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:46 PM
This is so beautiful...I am glad you still have your family to gather around.. wonderful acrostic! Hugs
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:52 PM
Only my youngest daughter and her daughter live here in Hawaii. My other children and grandson live in California. We try to get together on holidays or birthdays. Thank you Sandra. Hugs, Connie
Allison Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 1:54 PM
Delightful insight into your life Connie good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:49 PM
Thank you very much for your insightful comment Emile. It is much appreciated. Hugs, Connie
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:16 PM
Thanks alot Jan. I will have to go see if you entered one too. Hugs, Connie
Pinet Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 1:30 PM
Well done, tradition mixed with tranquillity has been captured by your artistic pen and held motionless on the page. Reading this brought back my youth and the hot summers enjoyed by all. You have captured the essence of families and traditions, so that it can be enjoyed by young hearts and live on. Well written. Emile. #7
Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 1:29 PM
- For me living in Norway ..... Hawaii sounds like a fairy tale or a beautiful dream - a beautiful poem, Connie - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:18 PM
Thank you Anne Lise. I think you also live in a magical place. Thank you for your nice comment. Hugs, Connie
Onclaud Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 10:06 AM
waiting with a smile, connie... huggs
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Thak you Nette...it is up now. Because Hawaii is 6 hours earlier than the east coast, it is somewhat of a disadvantage when posting my entries. By six am here it is already noon on the east coast. Hugs, Connie
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