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You are my shelter My foundation And in between The room To furnish With a dream Circa 2006 Posted 3/14/2017

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Date: 8/21/2019 8:34:00 AM
Truly, there is no place like home! Sweet Mo. Congratulations on your win! xxoo
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/21/2019 9:07:00 AM
My honey is my favourite place to be ;), Thank you Connie! Hugs, xomo
Date: 8/20/2019 11:29:00 AM
Beautiful Mo! Congrats!;)
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/21/2019 9:06:00 AM
Thank you Brenda, xomo, hugs!
Date: 8/20/2019 10:37:00 AM
I love the foundation. So true, it's not brick it's love. Beautiful poem. Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement. I was honored to read your poem :)-luloo
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/21/2019 9:05:00 AM
Thank you so much Luloo! Glad to air out this old one, extra thank you ;), Hugs! xomo
Date: 3/20/2017 2:29:00 PM
LOVE THIS, GIVES ME FEELINGS OF NOSTALGIA OF MY TWO SISTERS WHEN I WAS YOUNGER...
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/20/2017 5:20:00 PM
sweet! :)
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Sofia Ra
Date: 3/20/2017 2:30:00 PM
IN OUR HOME
Date: 3/18/2017 7:36:00 PM
I am intrigued by the response to this poem; it was written as a love poem to a person and I never thought to see it in such a literal light; I'm not sure I've actually had that feeling of a home. I am tickled that it has evolved in and of itself. Cheers to the soup!
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Date: 3/17/2017 12:45:00 AM
All we need is Love to make a home a home. My home is old and i love it, and really feel it gives back.
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Date: 3/16/2017 7:07:00 PM
I agree with them all but especially Judy saying that home is where the heart is~may all your dreams come true Mo! Enjoyed~Che:)
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Date: 3/15/2017 7:44:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Date: 3/14/2017 11:19:00 PM
Loved this!
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Date: 3/14/2017 4:56:00 PM
Right on. Home is where the heart is. Great job. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB
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Date: 3/14/2017 1:20:00 PM
wonderful!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/14/2017 3:54:00 PM
:) yay xomo!
Date: 3/14/2017 9:55:00 AM
I love this. Maybe being raised an Army brat set me up to love this poem, but no matter, I love it, I do! Also, I'm about to move into a rental house and have been mentally decorating all the rooms with my dreams. This write is precious! All the best ... CayCay
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/14/2017 3:53:00 PM
You tickle me pink! Good luck with the move lovely; I hope your dreams come true xomo!
Date: 3/14/2017 9:04:00 AM
Very nice Maureen :)
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/14/2017 3:54:00 PM
Ty! Xomo

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