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Hollow words echo loud like empty cans as they rattle in your mind and roll away saying nothing you can truly understand vacant thoughts that ramble wildly all astray. Hollow words don’t express good things of life to bring joy, sharing, caring and cure wrong. They possess a sounding curse so rife and in their nothingness an evil strong. Hollow words become fabricated lies spoken only to produce desired ends. In war with cunning forces gentle hearts outcry to stand for truth which they honestly defend. Hollow words don’t lead on to fated dreams. They bring deceptions and misguided rue. The speaker soon gets caught quick in the scheme, never knowing their own lies from what is true. 6/12/18

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Date: 6/18/2018 9:07:00 PM
“They bring deceptions and misguided rue. The speaker soon gets caught quick in the scheme, never knowing their own lies from what is true.” I enjoyed this very much, the title is very catchy
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/19/2018 12:37:00 PM
Thanks and much thanks Kale for your encouragement.

Book: Shattered Sighs