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Hollow

I knew them in their innocence Once filled with imagination and joy Playing fun games, climbing trees Offering a helping hand to others Able to care, able to be who they are Then, those who ruled had their way Teaching inexplicable things They were trapped by ‘conditional’ love Striving, always striving to earn it Nothing was ever good enough Then abuse, turned their fear to rage Later, I saw them become hollow Empathy was gone with time Hollow like dead, old, trees Acting out as if they will never fall Following footsteps of those who ruled Becoming a reflection of all they endured They are living, but they are gone Carrying out their immoral ways Was it the only way to get recognition? Was it the only way to be safe? By being on the side of perpetrators? I will never know the full reason I have only watched to witness Their innocence disappear in the dark But, I still remember the days When they were young and innocent Just trying to be who they are Now, their eyes hold a vacant stare Their beings are hollow, without a care Turned into the monsters they once feared Heidi Sands 6/11/18 *Placed 2nd in the Hollow Contest.

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Date: 7/13/2018 9:15:00 AM
Congrats Heidi!!! Love, Happy Jack XOX
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/13/2018 10:07:00 AM
Thank you Jack! :)
Date: 6/20/2018 11:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/21/2018 6:21:00 AM
Thank you Susan :)
Date: 6/16/2018 7:15:00 PM
Back to congratulate you Sandra on a well worthy winner. Mick
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/17/2018 6:53:00 AM
Thank you Mick. ..Heidi
Date: 6/16/2018 1:02:00 PM
Amazing poetry Heidi, congrats on your win!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/16/2018 1:10:00 PM
Thank you John. I appreciate all your support :)
Date: 6/16/2018 12:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Heidi, excellent poetry. :))
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/16/2018 1:02:00 PM
Thank you so much Roy. I appreciate your support :)
Date: 6/16/2018 11:35:00 AM
Heidi, congratulations on your win in the contest with this amazing write. Hope you are having a good day. Constance
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/16/2018 11:38:00 AM
Thank you very much BW. I hope you are having a nice day too :)
Date: 6/16/2018 10:38:00 AM
Congratulation Heidi, Excellent and well deserved xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/16/2018 10:39:00 AM
Thank you Mike. I appreciate your support :)
Date: 6/16/2018 10:33:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your much-deserved win, Heidi!:-)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/16/2018 10:37:00 AM
Thank you so much Edward :)
Date: 6/16/2018 10:27:00 AM
Heidi, awesome win :) congratulations . Hugs Eve ~' *
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/16/2018 10:29:00 AM
Thank you Eve. I appreciate your support :)
Date: 6/16/2018 10:11:00 AM
Congrats on your win Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/16/2018 10:13:00 AM
Thank you very much Joseph :)
Date: 6/16/2018 10:06:00 AM
This heart-breaking and deeply moving poem speaks volumes, Heidi ! Well done!! A big congratulations to you!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/16/2018 10:13:00 AM
Thank you very much Carrie :)
Date: 6/16/2018 9:35:00 AM
Back to congrats Heidi...your moving on up and rightly so...all the best my friend...L&L...^WW^
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/16/2018 9:37:00 AM
Thank you very much WW . L&L to you :)
Date: 6/16/2018 8:51:00 AM
Well done on your amazing win, great piece
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/16/2018 9:11:00 AM
Thank you Faux ! :)
Date: 6/16/2018 7:26:00 AM
Well deserved congratulations Heidi . Tom.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/16/2018 7:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Tom :) I am happy about it.
Date: 6/12/2018 11:02:00 AM
Chilling--but (sadly) all too resonating...Here's to good fortune in the contest, Heidi! :) gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/12/2018 2:39:00 PM
Thank you so much Gershon :)
Date: 6/12/2018 11:00:00 AM
A stark, dark and evocative poem that has an impact of confronted truth. Well written, Heidi.
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Date: 6/12/2018 2:39:00 PM
Thank you Geoffrey ! :)
Date: 6/12/2018 4:59:00 AM
Wow. This is a great entry, Heidi. Deep and powerful poetry. How true!. You did a wonderful job here. I enjoyed it.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/12/2018 5:15:00 AM
Thank you Supraja. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 6/11/2018 10:40:00 AM
Very intelligently composed revealing depth of hollowness. Really I admire.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/11/2018 5:29:00 PM
Thank you very much Anisha :)
Date: 6/11/2018 10:37:00 AM
The reality of the hollowness...heartfelt my friend...great verse Heidi...love & light to those in their hollow...^WW^
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/11/2018 5:30:00 PM
Thank you WW. I appreciate all your support :)
Date: 6/11/2018 8:42:00 AM
Oh my. Gripping ink Heidi. A winner for me. Good luck in the contest! xomo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/11/2018 5:29:00 PM
Thank you very much Maureen :)
Date: 6/11/2018 8:37:00 AM
How true is that, 'TURNED INTO MONSTERS THEY ONCE FEARED', and I will add, 'FOR THE REST OF THEIR LIVES LIVE IN DENIAL, NO TEARS'! Good luck in the contest. Mick
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/11/2018 5:29:00 PM
Denial is deep Mick. Thank you for your comment on this :)
Date: 6/11/2018 8:32:00 AM
It's sad to say what all the innocent see and hear now a days. It's a heartfelt poem well written. Thank you for your comment and wish you the best in the contest....Donna
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/11/2018 5:28:00 PM
Thank you for your comment Donna. I appreciate it :)
Date: 6/11/2018 7:12:00 AM
A powerful portrayal of how people can be robbed of their innocence, best wishes in the contest
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/11/2018 7:53:00 AM
Thank you very much Joseph :)
Date: 6/11/2018 7:12:00 AM
Dearest Heidi, in this profound poem you describe so vividly humanity's decadence! It is a great message and a superb assessment of today's world! Excellent!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/11/2018 7:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios :)
Date: 6/11/2018 7:05:00 AM
You have depicted how innocent lives change... impacted by their surroundings..the message in your poem rings true! Though sad to see, good turns into bad..very thoughtful questions you pose..a well crafted commentary on life..best for a win, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/11/2018 7:06:00 AM
It happens Vijay. I have witnessed it. Thank you for your feedback on this. I appreciate it very much :)

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