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Holiday Limerick

Desert dune damage, feet wrapped in gauze, To sue, the lawyer thought he had cause, Yet the relevant section, Escaped his detection, --There was no sandy clause.

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Date: 4/17/2017 9:40:00 PM
Maybe Santy Clause? Liked ... shalom is, thankfully, more than mere peace.
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Doug Vinson
Date: 4/17/2017 10:14:00 PM
Global warming.... who knows - maybe sand dunes at the North Pole?
Date: 4/15/2017 4:02:00 AM
Great stuff! Very clever - well done, Doug! Regards, John.
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Date: 4/15/2017 1:12:00 PM
Hi John. : ) Cheers! -- Doug.
Date: 3/23/2017 3:22:00 PM
Top of the afternoon to you Doug. And yes, happy holiday too. This was the smile and chuckle for the day. Thank you for that. Loved the incorporation of the legal matter. What a riot. Well done and stated.
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Doug Vinson
Date: 3/23/2017 6:26:00 PM
Happy spring, Lisa. : )
Date: 12/11/2016 8:00:00 PM
haha, Loved the last line play on words!
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/11/2016 10:05:00 PM
: ) Yeah, Andrea, the whole thing is just a set-up for it. : P
Date: 12/10/2016 7:55:00 PM
ha ha ha great limerick Doug:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/10/2016 7:58:00 PM
Thankee, Jan.
Date: 12/9/2016 8:50:00 AM
Brilliant, very funny and clever, enjoyed.
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Date: 12/9/2016 3:16:00 PM
Thank you, Roy. Cheers, Doug.
Date: 12/9/2016 8:21:00 AM
Such depth in a limerick, with just cause.
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/9/2016 8:45:00 AM
"If I was five years younger, I'd take a flamethrower to this place!" Cheers, Paloma. : )
Date: 12/9/2016 7:06:00 AM
Ha, obviously no sanity clause either. :) Funny and clever Doug.
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Date: 12/9/2016 8:44:00 AM
Chris, there is a limit, though. It's really constraining, often, to have to get all necessary elements in. I try and shoehorn them all in... Ended up having to take a big hammer and pound on it.
Date: 12/9/2016 5:33:00 AM
Sparkling Limerick ... Ha ha ...
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/9/2016 8:43:00 AM
Good morning, Probir. : )
Date: 12/9/2016 2:11:00 AM
Hahaha, now that is really clever! Great limerick! One of the best I've read!
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/9/2016 8:42:00 AM
Thank you, Rick. All the best. -- E. Scrooge