Holi

The trees smile for its been a while To see the sprinkle of colours Bewildering shades in blues and reds Celebrate the coming of Holi The canvas of earth with tints of mirth And happiness, peace and delight Splashes of vibrant flashy hues Spring colours abound in flowers A full moon and people swoon Lighting the holy fire The crimson blaze and Holika in lace Is devoured year after year Holi-An Indian festival of colours Holika- An effigy burnt in the purifying fire, an end of evil

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Harry Horsman

Date: 3/30/2011 12:53:00 AM

Thanks for a wonderful and informative poem, congrats, Harry

John Freeman

Date: 3/29/2011 7:15:00 PM

A beautiful job for 10th place, Tahera. "Congratulations!" Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/29/2011 11:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Tahera in Debbie Guzzi's contest "The Rhyme Inside". Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/29/2011 10:09:00 AM

Loved this poem the first time I read it, Tahera, and am delighted to see it in the winners' circle. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/29/2011 4:45:00 AM

Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest, Tahera

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2011 9:39:00 PM

well, I was happy to get to the bottom and find out that Holi is a festival's name. What a delightful poem of internal rhyme, Tahera. Congratulations!

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 3/28/2011 9:27:00 PM

Tahera - Many Congrats on big win with this superb creative write. Appreciate attempt on Indian festival. Holi pyre is lit at night. Ladies perform puja. Next day is colour splashing day. Luv & Best wishes-Hitendra Mehta

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/28/2011 7:54:00 PM

Congrats on your win and thank you for another glimpse into your country. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2011 7:46:00 PM

Congrats Tahera my friend on your wonderful winning poem in Debbie's cool contest with this excellent entry and superb rhyme sequence for the theme of contest luv.. enjoy another top ten success so sweet with luv ..

Elaine George

Date: 3/28/2011 7:01:00 PM

You have painted a beautiful vivid picture of this wonderful festival, dear Tahera. Many congrats on your well deserved win. Elaine

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/15/2011 6:07:00 AM

Holi sounds like a lovely celebration and your words compliment this holiday of India..Tahera.. if u look on the Home Page luv your name is now listed as a PM... enjoy..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/14/2011 11:44:00 AM

After a very super weekend I am back at the soup reading. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Tahera. There are so many diverse writers here and I am so happy I am able to read most of them. Have a wonderful week and may you find what you are looking for in life and in your writing. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/14/2011 10:55:00 AM

Thanks so much for describing the Holi festival for us, Tahera. I'm sure there are many cultures that celebrate the colors of spring. When I lived in Tallahassee, each year there was a "Springtime Tallahassee" festival with a parade that featured colorful spring blooms, especially azaleas. A wonderful poem, dear. Love, Carolyn

Constance La France

Date: 3/14/2011 6:35:00 AM

A new form for me, I like it, must try, your poem is lovely, I am sending you a soupy mail~~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/14/2011 4:21:00 AM

Rengay seems to be quite attractive form for expressing joy, Tahera

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/14/2011 4:18:00 AM

Yes. I shall be missing the colors and joys of Holika this year, Tahera