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Hole Smile

Wiggles and tugs not a chance for a pull excited and nervous soon to be a little less full relief ne'er a cry the battle is done a few crimson drops freedom is won filling the night with enamel fairy tale dreams magic's released under down so it seems with sun sparkling her eyes on a bed made for a queen countless treasures arise and her hole smile is seen

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Date: 2/15/2016 12:11:00 AM
Took me a second to understand what "hole smile" meant ... but once it clicked it was really adorable. Oh the days of pulling at loose teeth and putting it under our pillows ... it's a picture of childhood that's near universal. Cute poem.
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Date: 2/9/2016 12:29:00 PM
alluring piece for daddy's girl, tim...let her believe in fairies!..huggs
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Date: 2/9/2016 8:12:00 AM
Exciting and beautiful write for a future queen, dear Tim!
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Date: 2/9/2016 4:39:00 AM
- Scary, painful but happy :))) - Love it, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/9/2016 1:02:00 AM
What did the tooth fairy leave ? Such an adorable poem about your little one .They look so cute at such a tender age with missing teeth : )smiles.
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/9/2016 3:44:00 AM
The tooth fairy brought her $5 and a new bikini : )) ... She was all smiles and ready to show her friends at school.
Date: 2/8/2016 10:27:00 PM
Great poem! Did your daughter have a tooth pulled? :)
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Date: 2/9/2016 3:45:00 AM
She lost her first tooth on her birthday Sunday
Date: 2/8/2016 3:32:00 PM
This is pissa Tim. Now on the extortion of the Tooth Fairy.
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/9/2016 3:46:00 AM
Thanks John...lol

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