Holding Hands

Holding Hands

The things that we say
to the hands we hold,
so gentle and soft
or brazened and bold,
without saying words
we speak to the heart,
words that need voices
when hands are apart.

In friendship and love,
in joy or in pain
enduring of time
and seasons of change.
Without using words
what else could you do
to speak from the heart 
"I'm right here with you"
 
For courage and strength,
compassion and hope,
sharing a burden
and helping us cope,
Or tethers a bond
of passionate fire,
steadily fueling
a growing desire.

Some are against
as public display,
keeping their distance
for dignity's sake.
Their understanding
depends on the words,
missing the message
the heart may have heard.

Some say our lives
are much better shared.
For pain of the loss
it's cautiously dared.
A touch of the hand
lead hearts to be won.
When taking thy hand
the two become one.


                        - Jeannie Minor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/12/2015 11:34:00 AM
very touching. very true. loved it.
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/12/2015 12:13:00 PM
Thank you, Payal. So glad you enjoyed the read.
Date: 11/24/2015 7:27:00 AM
Must say your poems carry so much weight...Love being the subtle ingredient! It is amazing how words can create things , that only the third eye can see..."holding hands" being my favorite...
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Ayanda Ndaba
Date: 11/24/2015 8:57:00 AM
yes in a positive way! i was stimulated hence i say "holding hands" is the best for me...(meaningful weight) as a people we all have experienced joy pain love laughter...i guess you wrote from the heart.
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/24/2015 8:07:00 AM
Thank you, Avanda. I'm glad you liked it. Do you think perhaps my poetry might be a little too weighted? My goal is to stimulate, not suffocate. Hope to hear back from you. I came here to learn.
Date: 11/20/2015 9:31:00 PM
A sweet write, Jeannie! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/20/2015 10:29:00 PM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 11/20/2015 3:22:00 PM
Anacreontic verse a new adventure for most of us but this winner will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/20/2015 6:20:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. You are so kind!
Date: 11/19/2015 5:33:00 PM
Very touching write Jeannie congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/19/2015 7:13:00 PM
Thank you, Jan.
Date: 11/19/2015 8:35:00 AM
Lovely write, Jeannie.
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/19/2015 3:04:00 PM
Thank you, James. Glad you liked it.
Date: 11/19/2015 6:23:00 AM
Clearly expressed! congrats on your win!
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/19/2015 3:04:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 11/18/2015 11:59:00 PM
This is a nice poem, clear and simple just like I like them. Well done, Jeannie. Regards, Colin.
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/19/2015 12:43:00 AM
Thank you, Colin. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 11/18/2015 11:49:00 PM
Congrats, I see it's a winner. Great lyrics with heartfelt human touch and characteristics of a piece of life we all experience. Good job!
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/19/2015 12:41:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 11/18/2015 8:13:00 PM
Jeannie, Congratulations in Edward Ebbs, AV1 Contest. HUGS **SKAT**
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/18/2015 10:00:00 PM
Thank you, Skat. It was really fun and exciting!
Date: 11/18/2015 8:03:00 PM
Beautiful poem I really enjoyed reading it! Very heart felt.
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/18/2015 9:58:00 PM
Thank you, Mary. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 11/18/2015 7:46:00 PM
Congratulations Jeannie
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/18/2015 9:57:00 PM
Thank you, Nayda.
Date: 11/18/2015 7:28:00 PM
I am happy with all the enteries, congratulations on your well deserved win...thank you for participating!
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/18/2015 9:56:00 PM
Thank you, Edward. I appreciate your invitation to participate. I wouldn't have thought to do so without your reaching out to me. It was an awesome experience!
Date: 11/18/2015 6:49:00 PM
I can feel the love through this poem!! Awesome!!
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/18/2015 9:52:00 PM
Thank you, Sarita. So glad you liked it.
Date: 11/7/2015 9:37:00 AM
This is very sweet, Jeanie. Sometimes holding hands is the best way of communicating.
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/7/2015 9:49:00 AM
Thank you Lin, I completely agree!
Date: 11/7/2015 9:16:00 AM
Nicely done Jeannie :)
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 11/7/2015 5:25:00 PM
Like the edit :)
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/7/2015 11:11:00 AM
Like the edit?
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/7/2015 9:21:00 AM
Thank you Edward.
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