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Holding Candle

Holding Candle Holding on to the candle I was and I am, burning, shattered, evaporated and retold. Fired from both ends, the glaring candle and I have come to, tired, incinerated rest. From wild blazes on my inner screen, from curse of the moulded heat and molten wax, I am now waning for a sparkling moon, the beams of the sun. The porcelain base in tatters, broken shards of fragments, a remnant of what was, the fire had been too hot, the turmoil now shrouded in volcanic ashes. Imploded, explosive yesterdays, a jester moping, mocking mascara’s delusion, lost the gloss, a mere façade, a dissolution Yet some glowing ember has remained on empty smoking canvass, scorched in black and grey like charcoal smouldering Cast for change, another candle flickers, lies in waiting, a mosaic of fragrant fracture incensed, holding on, letting go, flaming and holding forth. 01st July 2017

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Date: 7/2/2017 7:47:00 AM
I love it how you shaped your poem. It underlines your message. Hold on to that candle.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/5/2017 2:33:00 AM
Thank you Darren. I will grasp the candle firmly today. But not so firmly that I squash it. Many wishes, Kai
Date: 7/1/2017 9:21:00 AM
Very beautiful, your theme and the way you structured them, Kai:)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 7/5/2017 2:33:00 AM
Thank you Jo, I appreciate that. Many wishes and may your candle burn nicely. Kai

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