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Hold Your Breath

If you gotta hold your breath, then it don’t pass the smell test If you must pinch your nose shut, to keep from inhaling fumes coming from a mouth-shaped butt Then it must be rotten to the core, smelling like dead fish washed up on the shore Wear your spiritual gas mask when you’re talking to someone with putrid, toxic pride swollen lips They be putting the truth to task, burping out lies is sporting fun ... taking Chernobyl verbal trips You might need to hold your breath a long time Don’t let hateful words poison your mind You better hope there’s no delayed effect ... crushed cyanide capsule regret A little whiff of spiteful poison can paralyze you, make you numb to the bone A lot of foul, fear mongering noise can disorient you too, make you become intolerant prone Don’t let the rancid odor of hate vomit get on your clothes, don’t let the vile stench of evil ethnic baiting get in your nose Have a discriminating intellect ... throw it in the garbage, if it don’t pass the smell test Otherwise, it might be the death of you — trying to speak and hold your breath, both at the same time But, suicide by scent assault don’t register as no violent crime

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/20/2017 9:43:00 AM
I like the raw visceral approach you took with this one Freddie.
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Date: 5/19/2017 5:36:00 AM
I like your vivid images and your message Freddie:) Amitiés
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Date: 5/18/2017 8:04:00 AM
Great descriptive write about when one spews hateful words at you Freddie! P & L~Che :)
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Date: 5/17/2017 3:59:00 PM
Your words, were clear and unpretentious. The author used superb imagery and vivid words to bring his feelings to the page, and into our hearts. The message is clear, and truly poetically expressed. Your emotions emerge from your words, and we can feel what you're saying and how it effects you. Emile. #7
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