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Hitch-Hiker

I'm Mortimer Monkey! My devilish side will jump on the back of the elephant's hide! I'll take unfair advantage Even taking bringing my baggage! While this jumbo sized taxi....gives me a ride!!

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/12/2010 12:57:00 PM

This is really cute, Carrie. I can just see the hitch-hiking monkey catching a ride from an unsuspected elephant. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 5/11/2010 8:33:00 PM

Good one. Love the images. Congrats on your win! Dan C

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/9/2010 6:32:00 PM

Congrats on the win

James Fraser

Date: 5/9/2010 8:15:00 AM

Hahaha, i can just picture this Carrier. Many congratulations on your win in the contest >> James

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/8/2010 5:56:00 PM

very cute Limerick Carrie. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Robert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2010 5:48:00 PM

Congratultions, Carrie on being in the top ten! (or maybe it's 20? haha) Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/8/2010 1:49:00 PM

Congrats Carrie on your success in my zoo contest with this hilarious entry .. thankxxx for supporting my contests..luv.. Linda-Marie

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/8/2010 8:38:00 AM

Another good one. She is going to have a hard job with all of these good limericks. Thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/8/2010 2:37:00 AM

funnny,haha,love this limerick. .Charma

Abe Lopez

Date: 5/7/2010 5:58:00 PM

great job Carrie, the monkey has been popular :-) good luck my friend!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2010 10:01:00 PM

Very fun one, Carrie. WAs the baggage a play on "trunk"? haha. LUv, andrea

Skat A

Date: 5/6/2010 8:10:00 PM

ENJOYED YOUR LIMERICK TONIGHT, A PLEASURE READING YOUR WRITE