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His Sweet Love Still Lives On SHM

As I lie on my bed reading my book My MIND WONDERED TO A LOOK AND A SMILE STARING at me. I turn to cry awhile. I could not stay focused; I closed the book. I remembered I had my husband's phone Number in my contacts. I reached for my Cellphone on the night table with a sigh I scrolled down to his name (Dad), just he'd known; Opened message. I've always called him Dad. When the screen came up, I typed, I love you, A heart I picked to place, when I was through, I pushed send. Tearful grief, don't think me mad. Two and a half years since he has been gone. Favored scent of HIS SWEET LOVE STILL LIVES ON. my mind wondered to a look and a smile staring~ always called him dad Mind wondered to a look and a smile staring ... his sweet love still lives on. 11/22/2023

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Date: 1/6/2024 2:32:00 PM
So beautiful..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/2/2024 8:16:00 AM
Although, this is such a lovely write, Eve...it made me sad reading about (Dad). So sorry for the loss of your husband, dear friend. Congratulations on your top win! Happy New Year! Charlie
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Date: 11/27/2023 12:39:00 PM
Ahh!! How sweet!! Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page with congratulations on my POTD. Sara K
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Date: 11/25/2023 8:43:00 AM
Awww this is true love and it is so beautiful what you both shared and still share today.. Beautiful take on the contest your sonnet and haiku are both very good..
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Date: 11/24/2023 4:23:00 AM
your poem was riveting and raw with the pain that comes from grief...you've captured that feeling so well. I felt the same way after my dad passed. The grief felt unbearable at times. There are times (some 20 years later) that I sense his presence and can feel his loving spirit. Miss him still. Hugs to you, Sara
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Date: 11/23/2023 2:29:00 AM
Eve this is such a real and raw poem which touched me deeply….it explains honest grief as it really is! I did the same with my mum when she passed….l would txt “where are you mum…l love and miss you” just writing this tears are welling. Love your beautiful words straight from your loving heart about your husband…l can't even imagine how hard it must be losing your husband…..Cuddles my friend! Debx
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Date: 11/22/2023 8:07:00 PM
I understand this. There are things to talk about but it's too late when they're gone. Thank you for memories.
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