His Rose, Her Death

HIS ROSE, HER DEATH

All she had wanted was a red, red rose,
That would quell the love of that handsome man, 
Alas! The rose tree was in winter's throes,
Unable to birth a rose of her plan;

So she said she will sing the whole night long,
With her heart against the thorn of that tree,
"Love is greater than life", rang out her song,
As her life blood fashioned his love ruby;

Yet, when her heart burst out in pain thereof,
When the crimson petals slowly opened,
He was not there to see her die for love,
Nor did he feel that love with blood deepened;

"Trust me baby, this is love," her last breath,
He never found out his rose was her death.

07/11/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 4:32 PM
Belated congrats on your win with this beautiful sonnet, Jo.
George   Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 11:00 AM
A ballad in a sonnet. AMAZING story, Jo. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
Scars Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 10:48 AM
oh so sadly beautiful, congrats sweet jo on your win ;)-luloo
Ashley Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 9:17 PM
A beautiful sonnet of tragic sadness, Jo. An enchanting and enticing write. Congratulations for your wonderful win. Warmest wishes ~Susan
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 6:10 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Jo with this lovely sonnet! : )
Hamilton Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 5:34 PM
Congrats Jo on a beautiful sonnet and nice placement!
Haight Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Such a deep and beautifully-written Sonnet, Jo. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 10:47 PM
Jo, thank you for entering my contest, CONGRATULATIONS on your win. Janice
Makama Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 1:22 PM
You just unzipped the covers of my mind to the unprecedented worship of your adorable lines with a powerful choice of words that can't just be ignored. Showers of your wisdom is well palpated in this page and the only thing I can say is a big WELL DONE! Can't wait to have more of your mental command flowing through my reading mind.
Smith Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 12:20 PM
Tragically sad ending to a lovely write Jo...
Warrior Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 10:51 PM
Beautifully penned Jo...maybe a winner...^WW^
Lindley Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 8:54 PM
Truly exceptional sonnet. Tremendous depth in its revelation of tragic sadness in love. You hit every mark with this jewel my friend.. A fav..
Roper Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 6:20 PM
Jo, A wonderful and tragically beautiful Sonnet, Good luck in the contest.~*
Onclaud Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 12:45 PM
wrenching, beautiful tone and mood, jo... one that is on top of the shelves.. wow.. huggs
Berggren Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 8:59 AM
Nice quatrains here with a message of unreturned love.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 2:38 AM
You have outdone yourself with this piece Jo! I really loved it! A Fave my friend! : )
Krampe Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 10:40 PM
Beautiful sonnet rendering of the story. Good luck in the contest.
Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 8:00 PM
wow, gorgeous writing from you, dear. I hope this garners a win for you!
Callus Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 2:34 PM
I truly enjoyed this sad yet delightful sonnet, Jo. Love is beautiful...why does it have to end like this! Regards // paul
Trifiatis Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 8:40 AM
A tragically beautiful Sonnet dear, Jo! Enjoyed!
Inman Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 8:00 AM
How beautifully written Jo. The ultimate sacrifice for love.
May Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 7:38 AM
The thorns of love's rose took its toll...A beautiful yet sad write Jo.. best wishes in the contest
Green Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 6:09 AM
this is wonderful Jo, so nicely written. A sad but beautiful story of love. This will do well in the contest.
Andresen Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 4:59 AM
- A beautiful poem, with a little sad song Jo - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
July 11, 2017 at 4:37 AM
I love a great sonnet, and this is no exception! Really well done, Jo! And best of luck to you in the contest
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