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His Old Clothes

I still hold onto h i s o l d c l o t h e s I made, stitch by stitch on grandma’s sewing machine- Yellow lace around the neck with blue suede, for this tragedy was so unforeseen. That day my soul s h a t t e r e d- Only his life mattered. My heart pitter-pattered seeing him die. It was July, angels did cry. My fragile essence perished and decayed, dreadful days are always stuck in between- I whisper in a hush, “my life scattered…”, T e a r s n e v e r d r y. The Puzzle Of My Rhyme - Poetry Contest Sponsor, Broken Wings Date, May 24, 2018

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Date: 6/25/2018 5:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Well-written, emotional, creative.
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Date: 6/24/2018 6:52:00 AM
Laura, congratulations on your win in my contest with this emotional and excellent write, well done ~
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Date: 6/23/2018 2:05:00 PM
So emotional, Laura. Line xx
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Date: 5/24/2018 7:17:00 AM
oh so sad LuLoo BW will love this emotional poem:-) hugs jan xx
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