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His Face Aglow

our fingers touched by candlelight and set our hearts aflame his face aglow, a tenderness too gentle to name our passions were ignited, hoping never to tame bold in our endeavors, playing love's sweet game coming through light and darkness, true love overcame with wedding vows, to God with us, we sacredly proclaimed our marriage shined as two souls became one and the same blessed with a son, a family portrait shimmers in a frame our love story began so long ago by a candle flame a beacon in the darkest night our hearts proudly exclaim
By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders. March 4, 2012 for Candlelight contest (Russell Sivey) second place

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Date: 3/12/2012 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "By Candlelight" contest Rhonda. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/11/2012 5:36:00 PM
Beautiful, Rhonda. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/10/2012 11:21:00 AM
Congrats Rhonda on your win.Loved it First time around.
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Date: 3/10/2012 7:11:00 AM
Rhonda... what s heart touching poem you have crated.....!!!!!!!! congrats on the placement.......luved the way you put across the last three lines......~sashi
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Date: 3/9/2012 6:44:00 PM
Congrats, Rhonda. Excellent piece. Great job. Nice going. Have a great weekend and Spring Ahead. Be well and God bless. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/9/2012 6:27:00 PM
congrats Rhonda on an exciting win for this elegant romantic write luv.. u had me at first line luv.. happy weekend..
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Date: 3/9/2012 10:59:00 AM
It is always a pleasure to read your poetry Rhonda. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on mine. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2012 7:08:00 AM
A beautiful love poem that fills the heart. Thank you Hugs Lizzie T
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Date: 3/5/2012 3:04:00 AM
this is going to top the list Rhonda.A lovely Monorhyme which depicts your love.Best wishes.
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