His Eyes

His eyes are like the sky when sun is peeking through. I sparkle as he holds me with his gaze. His smile brightens my day, for gloom just falls away when he walks in with a grin on his lips. His face that I adore is my radiant grace. That upturned mouth; those shining eyes - my light!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 12/29/2016 11:20:00 PM
R u mentioning ur husband? Lol, if so, then u 2 must hav a vry romantic relationship. Congratulations on ur win & ur love-life.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/1/2017 5:17:00 PM
I will just say... most of my romantic poetry is fantasy!
Date: 12/28/2016 9:10:00 PM
Cute! Congrats!
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Date: 5/24/2011 8:25:00 PM
:)
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Date: 4/20/2011 5:28:00 AM
Andrea- Nice image of romance! I love the upturned mouth and radiant grace. You will do well in Miss Catie's contest. Happy 'spring! Gwendolen
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Date: 4/19/2011 7:13:00 AM
I liked this good job!!
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Date: 4/19/2011 5:33:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your well deserved win in Catie's contest "Traditional Cinquain". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2011 5:03:00 PM
this is simply gorgeous... loving the shape
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Date: 4/18/2011 3:12:00 PM
a handsome admire?(: short&sweet.. how are you andrea, hope you're well.. i've been out a while. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/17/2011 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine HM in the contest, Andrea. Very lovely poem. Annnalise
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Date: 4/17/2011 9:58:00 AM
nice job! cory
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Date: 4/17/2011 5:46:00 AM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Andrea
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Date: 4/17/2011 1:30:00 AM
.....soup mail from me.......
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Date: 4/16/2011 9:01:00 PM
congrats on your win with this lovely cinquain
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Date: 4/16/2011 2:34:00 PM
Debbie's humming as she marks Andie as a favorite poet [long over due!] so glad to have read this! I want this again! Light & Love
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Date: 4/16/2011 2:06:00 PM
Many more congrats, Andrea : )
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Date: 4/16/2011 1:56:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your HM in this contest.. lovely words .. enjoy your special honor my friend with luv..
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Date: 4/16/2011 1:27:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your win in this contest with this wonderful Cinquain---kash
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Date: 4/16/2011 7:46:00 AM
This is so lovely, Andrea, each word speaks of love, best of luck in the contest, and thanks for your ever beautiful comments on my poetry~~
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Date: 4/16/2011 6:01:00 AM
Just beautiful Andrea, he must be some guy. Good luck in Catie's contest. Have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 4/16/2011 5:54:00 AM
Happy Weekend Andrea.. hope all went well with moving day and all are settled in and everyone is happy and having fun..luv..
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Date: 4/15/2011 11:28:00 PM
Great Cinquain Andrea, i like to keep in touch by commenting on pieces especially by poets i enjoy! (so you don't have to comment on mine) just do it when you get time! enjoyed reading you today.
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Date: 4/15/2011 8:01:00 PM
This is beautiful! And thank you for your lovely comment on my quick little monoku :)
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Date: 4/15/2011 10:06:00 AM
Love your Cinquain Andrea, we surely have similar vision where love is concerned :) Good luck in the contest. huggs, Gautami
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Date: 4/15/2011 8:57:00 AM
A romantic write Andrea and an excellent one for the contest. love phyl
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Date: 4/14/2011 11:53:00 PM
You lucky gal!!!! This will top the list - I am certain, Andrea. Re 'Lazy Boy' There was a contest to write a poem about a chair - I didn't enter this one - I entered one entitle d' Those Loving Arms - It won second place. It was a based on a true story. Anyway, girlfriend, thanks for reading all my musings. Much appreciated. I am just finishing up a new sonnet, when I do, I will go read several of your poems. Lainie
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