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His Doorway

lingering in love's mist in faint lines of brilliant light an essence of love whist as I return home to reunite eternity's gift reign glorious sight _________________ A Dr. Ram Contest Trinity: Father, Son, Holy Ghost Father~ The invisible energy Guide (Creator / Supreme Majesty) Son~ God revealed in man (Jesus / Eternal Life / Forgiveness ) Holy Ghost~ God working through man (Love) As One..Everything / All

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2011 5:04:00 AM

Congratulations ^Rick on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 4/16/2011 5:46:00 PM

Great to see you at the top once more Rick. Congratulations on this worthy poem's honored fourth place. Agape, Moses

Mitch White

Date: 4/16/2011 7:41:00 AM

I have to say this is "super" also. Congrats and Praise the Lord

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/16/2011 4:00:00 AM

Super Congrats Rick on your 4th place win.A brilliant entry..Gautami

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 4/16/2011 3:48:00 AM

Many congrats ^Rick for big win in Dr Ram's contest. Luv & best wishes always - Hitendra Mehta

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/15/2011 8:52:00 PM

Deep and enchanting. Warmest congrats for this super win dear.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2011 6:04:00 PM

a glorious doorway it is, Rick. Congratulations on this beauty that I was lucky to finally see.

Elaine George

Date: 4/15/2011 6:02:00 PM

Very spiritual and beautiful, Rick. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/15/2011 4:11:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your wonderful win in Dr. Ram's contest with this unique write luv.. enjoy another big win with luv and happy weekend too..my friend..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/15/2011 3:31:00 PM

Good one..Congratulations on your win..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/15/2011 2:43:00 PM

ohh very yummy, the meter! excellent, perhaps an "s" after reign & a comma after reigns, making it even more wonderful! also I really liked the feeling of humility given by NO capital letters! Congrad's on this fine verse winning! Light & Love a fan ;)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/15/2011 8:31:00 AM

Congratulations on the fourth place win in my contest, Rick

John Freeman

Date: 4/5/2011 10:23:00 AM

Beautiful entry for the contest, Rick, Good luck. Agape, Moses

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 4/4/2011 9:54:00 PM

Great entry forDr. Ram's Contest. An obvious winner. Soup Mail. All the bst, iolanda

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/4/2011 3:47:00 PM

wow so in line with what I have been reading on Ojibway faith! [ps The Shaman story is up & finished BUT I'd like to cut it down to a page so let me know what you think I can cut?]

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/4/2011 2:36:00 PM

dazzled am i.. my soul tarces your light, rick! well-scribes!! wnning wishes with huggs! :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/4/2011 1:18:00 PM

Enjoyed the poetic energy you possess!! write on....and on.....and on.....etc.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/4/2011 1:18:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, Rick