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His Door

The door to his heart Was a mystery to me Every one I tried was locked No one answered when I knocked Perhaps just the wrong time With love's resolve I kept trying I tried with love songs I tried with passion so sweet With one last attempt I tried To find the very key I found it; it was honesty The Door To A Wayra Barbara Gorelick 7/16/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/7/2015 2:51:00 PM
What I can say, simply excellent!
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Date: 7/29/2014 12:45:00 PM
Barbara, Congratulations, on making Nette's winning list. She's a tough judge. Take Care, LINDA :)
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Date: 7/25/2014 2:49:00 PM
how you found the way to open that door amazes me, barbara...finely scribed!.. your splendid win in my contest gladdens me.. congrats and huggs
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Date: 7/25/2014 6:07:00 AM
And back again wid huge congrats on this Wonderful write Barbara!
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Date: 7/24/2014 11:26:00 PM
Yea,Honesty is the best policy...Beautiful piece,Barbara...Congrats on your win...
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Date: 7/24/2014 9:36:00 PM
That is an awesome poem! great to see it on the winners list, well done :)
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Date: 7/24/2014 7:35:00 PM
Seeing this one again, I think it really is one that I like very much, Barbara. Congrats. Good to read it again.
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Date: 7/24/2014 3:32:00 PM
Stopping back with congrats and a locksmith .... hugs Tim
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Date: 7/24/2014 10:04:00 AM
This fine write floored me with it's message! A very hard task to get that across so very well in such a short poetry form yet you did it fantastically my friend!!! Huge congrats on your fine win!!!
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Date: 7/24/2014 9:51:00 AM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find its quality very good..Sara..If only honesty could be used in life and no one get their feelings hurt....
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Date: 7/24/2014 6:38:00 AM
WOW I love this Barbara! congrats on your win. Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 7/24/2014 6:17:00 AM
Lovely wayra with honesty as theme , congrats on the win, Barbara
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Date: 7/19/2014 4:18:00 AM
A7rating for you Barbara. That last line fits perfectly in love's lock. Hope you do well in the contest. // paul
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Date: 7/18/2014 6:32:00 AM
Truth shall set you free. Always a good standard! The ending was a icing on the cake!!! gl in the contest my friend.
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Date: 7/17/2014 10:00:00 AM
Yes, and it's hard to find honesty where love is involved. One wants to fantasize. Love, Dave
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Date: 7/17/2014 5:59:00 AM
Very lovely n sweet write Barbara! gl in contest!
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Date: 7/16/2014 11:46:00 PM
oh my, that was so neat!!! I just loved how you ended this one. I am loving seeing how people are doing this challenge.
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Date: 7/16/2014 8:12:00 PM
Seek and you shall find.Good luck in the contest with this poem
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Date: 7/16/2014 4:50:00 PM
Must have been by my place...I lost the key years ago...lovely write BG...hugs Tim
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