His car went really fast

Joe Six-Pack once saw a beautiful lass Bragged he had a car that went really fast She had a thing for race cars In her eyes Joe was a star He tried to kiss her, but ran out of gas

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/17/2020 6:34:00 PM

Hello Gershon … another witty limerick. Seems like he went too far in the car and couldn’t go far enough in erotica - thank you Gershon - Lindsay

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/17/2020 8:20:00 PM

Maybe Joe was too quixotic to be erotic... lol. :) gw

JAN ALLISON

Date: 9/16/2020 4:46:00 PM

ha ha ha love that punch line GW:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/16/2020 7:52:00 PM

pretty soon I won't be able to use it... I'll have to use 'ran out of electricity' instead. lol. Thanks, Jan! :) gw