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Picture Prompt Contest Sponsored by Margarita Lillico 10/15/24

His brothers are spell bound!


Two googly eyes and baby teeth
“I need them,” said Wizard O’ Keefe
They’ll help me make a spell
To create a fart smell
And upset our stepfather Keith!

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2024

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November 6, 2024 at 5:30 AM

Haha…you always bring a smile or giggle Jan and that is a gift in itself! You make a positive difference Jan…. Your cheeky humour is playful ,happy and fun that lightens life's load which is much needed. You bring a little laughter and light into peoples days! Thankyou…Debx

November 4, 2024 at 8:53 PM

What a way to upset a step father ! Ha.. ha! Mischief is writ on his very face. Quite hilarious, dear Jan.

Victor Buhagiar

October 27, 2024 at 10:18 AM

Thank you, Jan. I needed that laugh. Hugs.

James Peranteau

October 26, 2024 at 10:09 PM

lol, ya know, i don't bow to no one but Jehovah God Almighty, so, i'm just going to tip my hat t'ward your precious poet...perfect write for your attachment jan ;) much love...p.s...i read a few uv your post...lol, that one about you sh!t'n, i mean sit'n on the terlet; i wrote one, i think in 2010, reflecting this common practice uv eccentric artists(i love read'n your crap...i meant, artistic license) ,)

October 26, 2024 at 8:39 AM

That will work lol. Thanks for the smile Jan...

Mystic Rose Rose

October 26, 2024 at 4:14 AM

lol, you still got the Midas touch girl, love this. xo

Eileen Manassian

October 21, 2024 at 11:30 AM

Such fun! Good one, Jan. I could never come up with something for that picture. Good job. Thanks for your recent visit.

Jennifer Proxenos

October 21, 2024 at 10:30 AM

What a mischievous lot, sure they could think up many a plot, they could wizard and magic a smelly fart for stepfather Keith, such fun to spin and watch, then sneakily leave! Hugs Jan, Jen.

October 21, 2024 at 10:16 AM

Odiferous, Jan, and lots of fun! Thanks for the morning giggles! Hugs and blessings!

October 19, 2024 at 4:23 PM

Lol, A gaseous greeting for Keith

October 19, 2024 at 4:26 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

October 19, 2024 at 1:47 AM

Poor Keith :) Great limerick. Hugs.

October 19, 2024 at 4:26 PM

lol:-) hugs jan xx

October 17, 2024 at 6:19 PM

Good one Jan, did the boy lose his grip as the spell was flipped… Beryl

October 19, 2024 at 4:26 PM

lol thanks Beryl:-) hugs Jan xx

October 17, 2024 at 12:40 PM

Jan your title should have said "His brothers are smell bound ".lol xx

October 17, 2024 at 1:55 PM

lol John I did think that one too:-) hugs Jan xx

October 17, 2024 at 4:22 AM

I can just imagine that Jan!! LOL, great take on the pic!! Happy Thursday xxoo

October 17, 2024 at 6:30 AM

Thanks Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

October 17, 2024 at 12:17 AM

ok I saw this image twice, I have to stop drinking the koolaid LOL

October 17, 2024 at 12:18 AM

lol:-) hugs jan xx

October 15, 2024 at 11:38 PM

I wish them success!!!

October 16, 2024 at 1:47 AM

lol:-) hugs jan xx

Hilda Greenhough

October 15, 2024 at 7:40 PM

Nice limerick with smells of Halloween. It made me laugh.

October 16, 2024 at 1:46 AM

hahaha:-) hugs Jan xx

October 15, 2024 at 7:35 PM

LOL... this is so cool and very funny my dearest poet friend Jan. Brilliant and superb limerick shining through and through. A great relief of stress, boredom, exhaustion and everything. I love this a lot and I've extremely enjoyed. So glad and grateful to stop here and found this. Thanks for the great joy today. Best wishes always and God bless. Hugs

October 16, 2024 at 1:46 AM

Thanks Len, I can write humour no matter what is going on in my life and believe me some days are incredibly challenging but that's life - i just try and make other's smile:-) hugs jan xx

October 15, 2024 at 6:18 PM

LOL…those mischievous boys!

October 16, 2024 at 1:42 AM

thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

October 15, 2024 at 1:16 PM

What a fun/cute Limerick write. "Good Luck" We both did this one... Have a fun Autumn day writing away...................

October 15, 2024 at 4:05 PM

I found it SO hard to write for the contest Paula, i never usually struggle with the form but after 2 attempts were ditched after 4 lines in each, I came up with this one in the end:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

October 15, 2024 at 1:06 PM

Dear Jan, This is a Wonderful picture and a very cute poem. You have brought a smile and a laugh to me today. As my wife always calls it a poof of air because she is too proper to call it a fart. LOL! Good Luck in the contest. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

October 15, 2024 at 4:03 PM

ooh I've not heard that term Daniel, its amazing how farts are called different things in different countries - of course I HAD to do a little research for my next book and I discovered they are called 'shoot a bunny' in New Zealand lol:-) hugs Jan xx

October 15, 2024 at 12:19 PM

I found this particular prompt picture extremely difficult to try put into a Limerick, but leave it to our Jan you always find a way of squeezing one out lol, creative and fun as always, cheers David

October 15, 2024 at 12:50 PM

To be honest david i know several others who have struggled with this prompt.For the first time EVER i struggled to write a limerick first time round, i wrote 2 yesterday with 4 lines in each but wasn't happy with either so came to it fresh this morning:-) hugs jan xx

October 15, 2024 at 11:42 AM

ha! very cute, jan!

October 15, 2024 at 12:49 PM

thanks Ilene:-) hugs jan xx

October 15, 2024 at 9:00 AM

Hi Jan, by the look on their faces, it looks like, they not only farted, but followed through.

October 15, 2024 at 9:11 AM

hahaha - got a few poems about that in the book lol - you know me well lol:-) hugs jan xx

October 15, 2024 at 8:50 AM

Wizard O'Keefe! Good grief! Such great words for that photo. You give as good or better than you get, Jan.

October 15, 2024 at 10:54 AM

I had a bit of trouble getting a theme that worked, but I have to say you couldn't have written better lines.

October 15, 2024 at 9:00 AM

thanks Lin, to be honest Lin for the first time EVER I struggled to write a limerick for a contest and this is my third attempt and I am finally happy and have ditched the other 2 versions i wrote last night:-) hugs jan xx

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