Hint of Autumn

Are you chameleons, dearest leaves?
Stealing colors of amber, like thieves;
Hiding pure gold dusts within, sometimes, 
Putting on crimson shown like sun-shines...!

Birds, dear, from for lands! Don't go away!
You're nature's pleasure; kindly do stay! 
Nightingales, cuckoos, swifts, and cranes,
Tell us, time-to-time, your inner pains...!

Blackberries, rose-hips and crab apples, 
Laced with vivacious cocktail samples;   
Ivies, yet, seem to start flowering, 
Your scent, like clear cologne, hovering...!

Seeds! Fallen like very falls of Christ!
Though within womb of earth, iced and sliced; 
Will resurrect and resuscitate,
Ascend toward ethereal state...! 

I sense you, dear autumn, you tickle,
Each vein of heart and mind, you prickle; 
Falling of leaves makes me unhappy,
I know, they'd spring greenish and sappy...!


20 August 2022 
Hint of Autumn Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 8/22/2022 6:44:00 PM
"Seeds! Fallen like very falls of Christ! Though within womb of earth, iced and sliced; Will resurrect and resuscitate, Ascend toward ethereal state...! " Beautiful comparison ! Altogether the poem has a unique approach to the autumnal change... and written with fluid ease. Agree with what Panagiota has expressed here. Into my Fave too....
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/24/2022 7:30:00 AM
You being an English Professor may know much. I simply write. Thank you very much.
Date: 8/20/2022 11:10:00 AM
I fell in love with your very first line! You are quite a poet! I admire your easy, flowing style. A FAV for me! Thank you for being here! Panagiota
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/22/2022 7:35:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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