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Hint of Autumn

Are you chameleons, dearest leaves? Stealing colors of amber, like thieves; Hiding pure gold dusts within, sometimes, Putting on crimson shown like sun-shines...! Birds, dear, from for lands! Don't go away! You're nature's pleasure; kindly do stay! Nightingales, cuckoos, swifts, and cranes, Tell us, time-to-time, your inner pains...! Blackberries, rose-hips and crab apples, Laced with vivacious cocktail samples; Ivies, yet, seem to start flowering, Your scent, like clear cologne, hovering...! Seeds! Fallen like very falls of Christ! Though within womb of earth, iced and sliced; Will resurrect and resuscitate, Ascend toward ethereal state...! I sense you, dear autumn, you tickle, Each vein of heart and mind, you prickle; Falling of leaves makes me unhappy, I know, they'd spring greenish and sappy...! 20 August 2022 Hint of Autumn Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh

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Date: 8/22/2022 6:44:00 PM
"Seeds! Fallen like very falls of Christ! Though within womb of earth, iced and sliced; Will resurrect and resuscitate, Ascend toward ethereal state...! " Beautiful comparison ! Altogether the poem has a unique approach to the autumnal change... and written with fluid ease. Agree with what Panagiota has expressed here. Into my Fave too....
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/24/2022 7:30:00 AM
You being an English Professor may know much. I simply write. Thank you very much.
Date: 8/20/2022 11:10:00 AM
I fell in love with your very first line! You are quite a poet! I admire your easy, flowing style. A FAV for me! Thank you for being here! Panagiota
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/22/2022 7:35:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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