Him

He said that he would be my friend and treat me well But he ended up putting me through hell I was in tears when he snapped at me one night And it was as if someone had turned on the light My heart did not break after it fell.

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Skat A

Date: 5/7/2016 3:35:00 AM

Kat Davis, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/2/2016 11:04:00 AM

Kat, nice to see this one again.. linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/1/2015 6:31:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your love lossed winning work.Congrats..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/27/2015 5:22:00 PM

Kat, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 5/27/2015 10:18:00 AM

KAT, Congratulations, thanks for the contest support. Hugs SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/28/2015 8:46:00 PM

Kat, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 2/27/2015 10:06:00 PM

kat, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/23/2015 12:47:00 PM

- One great limerick, Kat ! - I welcome you to the P Soup - Nice to meet you, looking forward to getting to know you and your poems :) - // Anne-Lise :)