Hiku

g a l e - f o r c e w i n d s l a s h i n g r i p p i n g rooftops walls, c o l l a p s e ~ r u b b l e tells the tale

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2025 7:47:00 PM

Well done and congrats

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/14/2025 10:51:00 AM

Great shape…the feel of the rain lashing. Congrats!

Ink Empress

Date: 5/13/2025 9:01:00 AM

Rubble tells the tale makes me think of something, specific environments we witness in some parts of the world. And the environmental touch of this truly is powerful sis! Did you also experience storms last night? I heard there was a storm where you staying! Pleasure reading this creative gem! Best wishes! A fave it is! Sending you light always

Billie Jama
Date: 5/13/2025 10:59:00 AM

I just drew some inspiration from natural disasters. The weather has been lovely here. Thank you for the support

Lin Lane

Date: 5/13/2025 5:39:00 AM

Hi Billie. I wish I could get into these hiku, hiccups I call them because they're a titch difficult to read, but this one is perfectly clear to me, Kudos to you!

Lin Lane
Date: 5/13/2025 6:07:00 AM

You’ve achieved success!

Billie Jama
Date: 5/13/2025 5:47:00 AM

Thanks Lin. I try to make it clear yet creative