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the night is crisp cold feet crunch leaving footsteps in new fallen snow __________________ February 01, 2023 Poetry/Haiku/hiku Copyright Protected, ID 02-1522-703-01 All Rights Reserve, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Your Decision sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 02/03/2023 Honorable Mention

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Joanna Feltham

Date: 2/3/2023 11:55:00 AM

My favourite form. :-) Nicely penned. Congratulations on your winning placement.

Constance La France
Date: 2/3/2023 5:04:00 PM

Joanne, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, I like this form too, Constance

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/3/2023 10:59:00 AM

Love it Constance. Congrats on the win! :)

Constance La France
Date: 2/3/2023 5:04:00 PM

Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, Constance

Sally Eslinger

Date: 2/2/2023 8:38:00 AM

Your haiku notes the remarkable memorythose of us in winter’s cold places have been blessed to know. The sound and sight evidence our passing, but lasting experience. Thank you. Wonderful haiku, Constance. xox. sally

Constance La France
Date: 2/2/2023 2:03:00 PM

Dear Sally, thank you so much for the compliment, and nice comment, blessings ~Constance