Hiku - Waiting

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the air is still with heavy clouds hanging low trees&birds&flora . . . waiting ____________________ June 06, 2022 Poetry/Haiku/hiku - waiting Copyright Protected, ID 06-1463-014-06 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, A Brian Strand Premiere Choice sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 06/07/2022

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Ann Foster

Date: 6/8/2022 3:50:00 PM

A kind of stillness, anticipation... wonderful... Excellent write. Ann

Constance La France
Date: 6/8/2022 5:26:00 PM

Ann, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment , blessings ~Constance

Bill Baker

Date: 6/7/2022 2:38:00 PM

I like the progression from changing weather to waiting for the rain. Good luck in the contest. Bill

Constance La France
Date: 6/7/2022 3:36:00 PM

Bill, thank you so much for the comment, did not place in the contest, oh well, blessings ~Constance