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Hiku - Jedi at Ten

f o r c e f i e l d d i m the l i g h t s g l o w b a l l s like l a s e r s in f l i g h t r e f l e c t i on O N s c r e e n dangerous tango and duel sky walker and grand Vader

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Date: 5/7/2025 6:56:00 AM
I can hear the galactic sizzle. Well done. Don't know much about form...but this method seems to require a lot of poetic dedication. Nicely done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2025 11:00:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 5/7/2025 2:14:00 AM
I agree with Anne. This is very creative. You have a knack for these types of poems.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2025 4:43:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 5/6/2025 9:06:00 PM
A poet AND an artist you are!! ~ gwe
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2025 4:43:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 5/6/2025 6:44:00 AM
- Creative poem, Kim - Well done :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2025 8:08:00 AM
Thank you! xx
Date: 5/5/2025 5:35:00 PM
Cool formatting. Are you a Star Wars fan?
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2025 5:50:00 PM
I enjoyed the original trilogy! :)
Date: 5/5/2025 11:53:00 AM
Very creative Kim, may the force be with you.. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2025 3:14:00 PM
LOL…thanks, Tom!
Date: 5/5/2025 11:17:00 AM
Wow, this is pretty cool- love the "tango and duel"
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2025 11:21:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!

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