High Noon- Big Dale

A washed-up Bank robber named Big Dale
Tried to rob bank, near county of vale
                He didn’t move as quick
                   Got hit with a stick
 Lawman got word, closed fast on his trail
















05/03/2022
Contest: High Noon
Sponsor: Joseph May
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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George Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 8:54 PM
Yes, he shouldn't go unpunished ! Thank God, the lawman could follow his trail ! Great limerick Alexis. Congratulations on your win !
Poet Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 10:44 AM
Congratulations on your win, with this perfect Limerick. Always wish you the best, thanks for visiting and commenting on my poem.
Roper Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 9:34 AM
Congratulations on your win, Alexis. Blessings my friend
Alex Avatar
May 8, 2022 at 10:00 PM
Interestingly written. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 8, 2022 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations on your win. A cute/Limerick write. Have a blessed day/week......................
Sangster - K Avatar
May 8, 2022 at 7:10 AM
Congratulations Alexis on your win. Cheers Anne :-)
May Avatar
May 8, 2022 at 6:18 AM
That cowpoke was too slow, Very nicely penned Alexis, Congrats on your win
Y. Avatar
May 9, 2022 at 9:36 AM
Hi Joseph, I’m glad that you liked it. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
Kaianah Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 4:56 PM
Great Limerick Alexis! I wish you the best of luck in the contest! ~Anna Kaianah
Anaya Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 5:09 PM
Big Dale...The bigger they are the harder they fall, great name for your cowboy! Good luck in the contest ALexis! Happy Cinco de Mayo.
Proxenos Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 12:50 PM
No one can not dodge the law as your lawman, who closed fast on the trail on the tracks of Big Dale shows us - great Limerick Alexis. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Canerdy Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 6:12 AM
Good one, Alexis! Janice
Watt Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 8:17 PM
The bigger they are, the slower they move... fun write! Best wishes, my friend and enjoy your day ~ John
Buhagiar Avatar
May 4, 2022 at 2:57 AM
Loved your limerick. Have less time for the soup.
Buehler Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 9:06 PM
This is an excellent limerick, Alexis. Funny, too! :D
Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 4:07 PM
great job with the challenge, Alexis. I like contests with fun themes like this one
Allison Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 2:48 PM
fab limerick Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Baker Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 12:36 PM
Nice Limerick, Alexis. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Bill
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