High Fives At the Casino

bet

the car

three aces

lost to four fives

walk



*Lanterne for Brian's Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 29, 2011 at 1:20 PM
Very witty write here Carolyn....liked it...
Pettit Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 7:47 PM
A lot of bad breaks like this have been handed out to casino patrons in the past. I worked in Atlantic City for over fourteen years, and I have plenty of vicarious experiences like the one you have described here so well.
Fraser Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 5:08 PM
And many a bet has. Quite a few poker players will fold two aces in five card stud, killer hand dealt first time round >> James
Harrison Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 9:04 PM
Oh this is really good Carolyn! My parents went to Vegas a lot when I was little. They only played the slots. Sometimes I saw people who really did bet more than they should have. Cool poem.
Knop Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 5:20 AM
Sorry, forgot to wish you best of luck in Brian's contest...Gert
Knop Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 5:19 AM
A funny write, Carolyn! Hope that this won't happen often!...The brass plate of Leichhardt's rifle with his name and the year 1848 engraved is exhibited in the National Museum of Australia at Canberra...Enjoy your day and thank you for your comments..Love, Gert
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July 5, 2010 at 4:04 PM
As a 'Booray' (Bourre') addict I can sure relate to this!... These days we only play for fun (with VERY small stakes involved!) Funny, funny, funny stuff Carolyn!...Good luck in Brian's contest - Tim
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July 5, 2010 at 12:44 PM
well, I just went and looked and he said five lines , "on any theme" I guess I am in the clear, but wow, people are using the HIgh Fives in their poems. I think you guys got it in the bag! See ya later, alligator!
Dietrich Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 12:42 PM
oh, boy, I just thought of something as I saw YOUR poem here and someone else's. Were we supposed to use HIGH five in our poems?? OH, man, I did not catch that all. I might as well hang it up then. I did not do it! Now I gotta go back and see his contest description again. Anyway, this one is clever, CArolyn. LUv, Andrea
Spence Sr Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 11:39 AM
Hey, you should have called me. I would have picked you up in my winged chariot and gave you a ride; even if it were raining. You didn't have to walk. This is so funny! You should have used the bicycle as a bet. Great job! Joseph
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July 5, 2010 at 8:41 AM
short poems bother me but this one blew me out! especialy the title, that got a laugh when i read it. i immediatly thought of my mother. then reading the poem then i got the jist the punch line. which was my whole oppinion about casino's. hey i got one.
Mehta Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 6:05 AM
A brilliant entry in the contest. Good luck in the contest
Horsman Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 5:09 PM
this is wonderful Carolyn, good luck in contest Harry
Falotico Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 5:09 PM
Love this!!!! A wonderful write from a wondeferful lady.....good luck in contest...Always Michael
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July 4, 2010 at 5:08 PM
Tell me you wouldn't do that! You wouldn't! Hey, contact me on Soup Mail. I want to run something past you concerning you and me. I need your okay. Regards, Gerard
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