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Hiding In the Sky

Luna in the sky now hides As clouds obscure her glow Sometime soon where stars reside Her moonbeams she may show My eyes search the velvet sky To see if she'll appear But clouds refuse to let her by And darkness holds her there She'll find a way to part the clouds and all her glory show To release herself from the shroud And let her beauty glow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/27/2017 9:01:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Joseph I love that velvety sky and I love to watch the moon peep though the clouds Joseph it is quite an eerie sight with a shadowy halo that seems to appear:-) hugs Jan xx
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Joseph May
Date: 1/28/2017 5:27:00 AM
Thank you Jan
Date: 1/27/2017 7:54:00 AM
So very beautiful, Joseph! Like only you can do it! Best wishes. Pandita
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Joseph May
Date: 1/28/2017 5:26:00 AM
Thank you Pandita
Date: 1/27/2017 7:37:00 AM
- Enjoy its beauty, lovely written - Happy weekend, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 1/28/2017 5:25:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine

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