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Hidden Hearts

HIDDEN HEARTS I have a heart that you can't see because it's deep inside of me I try so hard to hide it I try so hard to let no one in But I'm starting to fall for you not so sure how it happen thought I was doing good But here I am day dreaming of you My heart is scared of getting hurt again I know I'm not the only one Your doing good at hiding your heart so deep inside of you I really don't know how you feel I'm to scared to ask what the answer might be It's only fair that I don't ask Because I'm way to scared to tell you what I'm hiding in my heart as well I wouldn't be able to take any kind of let down Because I've been let down so many time it's not even funny any more I laugh so hard when I'm with you We have so much fun no matter what we do We dance ,we talk ,we laugh We have not fight or disagree yet But when we do I know it will be ok Because I have hope in us that we can make it through anything With love I know we can make it till the end I just hope you feel the same I just hope you love me too I just hope you never lied Because i couldn't take any more pain My heart can only take so much I know you've been hurt just as much as I have I just hope your not holding back on loving me Because I've tried and lost I can't stop falling for you I can't stop thinking about you I do think of other things But as of right now your my favorite thing to think about

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Danielle Satterfield

Date: 7/14/2014 1:15:00 PM

Thank you everyone for the wonderful feed back on my poem. Sorry it took so long to write back didn't have internet for a while.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/4/2014 5:41:00 PM

Very heartfelt write, Danielle. You want to express your love, yet at the same time you are afraid to do anything that might compromise it. Welcome to soup:) cu around. // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/25/2014 4:58:00 AM

Read and enjoyed the poem. Congrats on the win,

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/24/2014 8:36:00 PM

Danielle, .. Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting one of my many contests. I enjoyed every entry! If you like, stop by my latest blog "Never Say Never or my newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact here on this site. Always & Forever ~LINDA

Faye Gibson

Date: 6/11/2014 2:48:00 PM

Danielle, welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you will find much to encourage you on this site as you share your poetry with others who love to write. I enjoyed your first poem very much. Please visit my poems when you are able. Many writers will comment on your poetry if you do the same. Best wishes.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/10/2014 6:14:00 PM

Hi Danielle, We are nice. By the way,, Thank you for the comment on my comment. I am looking forward, in hearing from you again. You will enjoy this site, I guaranteed or my fun poetry name isn't PD :) I highly recommend the blog area, there you can read what is hot, and what is going on here at The Poetry Soup. If you like click on some of the side features ((-UNDER- the area where it reads "Member Poets/Poems")) to the left of this comment. -That's my favorite soup section. If you scroll down to where it reads "Contests" you will enjoy the "Contest Winners: Member " feature. Click away, and check out what's cooking. Enjoy reading and following, many of the incoming winners. "I SURE DO." Please feel free to comment and read any of my poems, if you'd like. My poems are not the easiest to understand:) I'm still learning myself. However, I enjoy encouraging others. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. I might be able to help, if not I will recommend someone. Take Care~LINDA~

Tim Smith

Date: 6/10/2014 4:22:00 PM

I am glad you are able to get your feelings out in your poetry...It sure helps me...hope to see more of your wonderful write...hugs Tim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/10/2014 3:53:00 PM

Hi Danielle, it's nice to be in love, even nicer to sit and think of the person, who AWEEEE's your heart... this has been a sweet poem to read, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Danielle Satterfield
Date: 6/10/2014 6:06:00 PM

Thank you so much Linda. It feel great to have such a great welcome from every one. Every one on here are so nice.

T.Nicole Williams

Date: 6/10/2014 2:07:00 PM

Words that speak to the heart...beautiful poetry Danielle! Nicole

Danielle Satterfield
Date: 6/10/2014 2:22:00 PM

Thank you. I have always said that poetry is heart way of speaking . I love to write and read poetry.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/10/2014 12:36:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Danielle :) - I choose your first lovely and moving poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Danielle Satterfield
Date: 6/10/2014 2:20:00 PM

So far I love this site. Every one on here is nice and lot of great poems to read.

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 6/10/2014 8:47:00 AM

Lovely poem...This is a heart-felt write and hopefully that individual had the opportunity to read this for themselves...Beautifully expressed!

Danielle Satterfield
Date: 6/10/2014 2:18:00 PM

Thank you so much. The person this is about has read it . We have been together now for 14 months now and doing great.

Skat A

Date: 6/9/2014 11:33:00 PM

Daniell, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Danielle Satterfield
Date: 6/10/2014 2:15:00 PM

Thank you so much Skat A for the very nice welcoming.