Hidden Eyes

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Hidden Eyes I want to say hi, I want to say hello. I want to tell you, something? What? (my heart is full, and empty…) I must look strange to you. You look different to me. We are unique, surely… That does not mean, we are not the same. You see the world through, eyes, manipulated… by the outside. I have never known that world. I have lived another. Yet, as I pass you by, I want to say… Hi.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 8/13/2019 3:56:00 PM

So sweet, Ann.

Ann Foster
Date: 8/13/2019 4:03:00 PM

Thank you for passing by butterfly... Hug! Ann

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/13/2019 3:21:00 PM

"We are unique, surely… That does not mean, we are not the same." - I wish everyone knew THIS.

Ann Foster
Date: 8/13/2019 4:02:00 PM

My dear friend, I have only known a short while... I wish that I could get a giant ladder, climb it high into the clouds and shout it, again and again, until heard!!! (lovely flowers your way today...!) Ann