Hidden By Another Skin: The Unexpected Use of An Orange

A curled-dry orange peel,
all that stands against gray 
dark lips of gaping hole, 
whose eye can steal your form, 
or lift your full bankroll.

A curled-dry orange peel,
hanging pith on the cliff-
edge ridge of my laptop,
now camera obscura
made of a lunchtime prop.

A curled-dry orange peel,
braver shield than post-it,
organic digestive,
space between aperture
hints at curves, suggestive. 

A curled-dry orange peel,
modesty's upholder,
bulwark of hair carefree;
hunger's leftover coat
might have been potpourri.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Ashley Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 6:42 PM
Dear Jaymee, congratulations for your win in Emile's contest with your exceptional poem. I especially loved the imagery of "hunger's leftover coat" -wow! Your last two lines provide a grand finale! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Sidwell Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 9:05 AM
Fascinating and unique! Congratulations on your win!
Fowler Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 8:49 AM
Brilliant Jaymee...what an intriguing and unique poem. Congratulations! :)
Pinet Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 7:45 AM
Congratulations Jaymee! Your interesting, unusual poem, "Hidden By Another Skin: The Unexpected Use of An Orange," has placed "Third" in my contest. Your poem stood out with your superb use of metaphors and imagery. Very well done my friend, Emile.
Emate Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 9:27 PM
Congratulations on your win. A nice poem.
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