Hi Mom

When grandpa D comes to visit, he smokes until we cough
We also have to say “We know you are here, you can stop smoking”
My father has been supposedly “gone” for nine years.
I see him monthly, checking my flowers, to see if I am watering them.
One day we heard the kitchen cupboards slamming.
Bang. Bang. Bang. Bang. Bang.
 I was terrified.  My husband and I were they only ones in the house.
What is that? I asked him.
He said “I think it was my mother. She used to slam the cupboards.”
I peeked out. There was nothing there.
After my mother passed, we waited for a signal but did not get one.
Until I needed medical treatment, and finally got it.
Isn’t this your old phone number? My husband asked me.
I looked at it.  
It was my parents’ number for over sixty years.
It keeps calling me, he told me.
I dialed the number.
It has been out of service for over seventeen months.
Hi Mom.
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Pandit Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 5:01 AM
Your love for her speaks, Caren. No doubt she's looking over with blessings. Many can relate to your thoughts.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 7:06 AM
Thank you very much Vijay
Theraven Avatar
July 24, 2021 at 9:44 AM
Caren, Telephone connection made through the switchboard of the heart in this poem 'Hi Mom'. Though the toll charges tend to be astronomical. -Richard
Krutsinger Avatar
July 25, 2021 at 7:56 PM
I cannot imagine paying this price because this call was priceless Richard.
Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2021 at 9:26 AM
wow, Caren. Is this true story??? Oh, I see you are saying yes to Milt. I sure would like to get this kind of thing from a loved one who passed on. It would give such reassurance!!!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 25, 2021 at 7:56 PM
Andrea, we are part Irish; we have a lot of fey in us. My family is full of soothsayers, psychics, and mediums. It is our "normal" - I do think it is something everyone can get in touch with if they have a desire.
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 24, 2021 at 4:09 AM
An intriguing write. I often feel elders who died in family are still around, it is just that we cannot see. Everytime we ask for help from my Mother in law who passed away 2 years back, our problem instantly gets resolved. It is amazing.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 25, 2021 at 7:57 PM
My husband is always asking his father for help -his father supposedly "died" in 1984, as soon as he asks his Dad, the answer is there.
Hankins Avatar
July 23, 2021 at 6:21 PM
Nice, Caren. I don't have space here, but I could tell you about similar experiences, totally inexplicable, that actually happened to me. So, I know it can and does happen.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 23, 2021 at 6:27 PM
This is true
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