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Feb. 6. 2025

A Valentine Senryu's Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Tania Kitchin

hey valentine

on valentine's day
embrace with burning desire~
inch to ecstasy.

lovevalentines daysenryu

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/12/2025 7:06:00 PM

Congrats, Valsa!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/10/2025 11:35:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "hey valentine" write again. Have a great day today and on Valentine's Day.........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2025 10:02:00 PM

Way to go, Valsa. Congratulations

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/9/2025 2:03:00 PM

Valsa, congratulations on your winning placement with your passionate senryu.

Valsa George
Date: 2/9/2025 11:10:00 PM

Thanks a lot dear Tania for the placement given.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/9/2025 7:23:00 AM

Good one very passionate. Sara K

David Crandall

Date: 2/8/2025 8:55:00 AM

Good advice and great title!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/8/2025 12:28:00 AM

Dear beautiful Valsa, your senryu is so heartwarming and romantic! I absolutely adore your title with "hey valentine" how welcoming and sweet is that... and as the words proceed "embrace with burning desire" The hues of passion there are so gorgeous! Brilliantly written for the contest, sending you many best wishes and light. Missed reading your poetry during my time being away from soup :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/7/2025 10:30:00 PM

Romantic and lovely, Valsa. Best of luck in the contest. :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/7/2025 6:48:00 PM

Love's Day doesn't last long enough. Happy Valentine Day to you. May you receive chocolates.

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/7/2025 7:07:00 AM

Sounds like a winner to me. Good luck in contest. Happy Valentine's day!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/7/2025 5:20:00 AM

lovely entry dear , best of luck in life and in poetry too :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/7/2025 4:57:00 AM

Dear Valsa, Wow, steamy in just a few words, you capture the essence of longing and passion with such intensity. The simplicity makes it even more powerful, leaving space for me to feel every spark.Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Mike Gentile

Date: 2/7/2025 4:53:00 AM

I love your romantic Senru Valsa! Good Luck in the contest!!

Ink Empress

Date: 2/6/2025 11:48:00 PM

Dear sweet valsa, I absolutely love your valentine senryu, and its cute how youv titled it too, “ hey valentine” and i love the way youv written “ embrace with burning desire” lovely reminder! To your readers! Whichever form you do, your words always flow so well and that is truly impressive! Best wishes in the contest. Sending you light always