Hey Shadow

I saw a shadow and wondered if it was mine So I asked it if it was mine… it just looked at me like I was stupid, yep, it was mine

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2017 9:04:00 PM

Hey you are even good at humor. I love this, Chris!

Chris Green
Date: 4/14/2017 8:23:00 AM

Thanks so much Andrea, I am happy you enjoyed this one

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 4/13/2017 5:43:00 PM

That was a good one Chris. Thank you for making us laugh:) Amitiés

Chris Green
Date: 4/13/2017 5:45:00 PM

Thank you for making me smile. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/13/2017 5:27:00 PM

Too funny Chris! The shadow knows...(cue laughter)

Chris Green
Date: 4/13/2017 5:43:00 PM

Thanks again Kim. I'm glad you liked this one.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/13/2017 5:05:00 PM

i love the humor in this, chris. it reminded me of the scene in peter pan when peter had to have his shadow sewn back on...

Chris Green
Date: 4/13/2017 5:22:00 PM

Thanks so much Ilene. I like that comparison.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/13/2017 4:11:00 PM

My shadow is kind of silly too..It keeps putting its tongue out to anyone who pisses Her off..Smile :)

Chris Green
Date: 4/13/2017 4:56:00 PM

Ha, that's funny. It's nice to have a silly shadow. :) Thanks so much my sweet friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/13/2017 3:05:00 PM

I have enjoyed this poem it made me laugh.Did your shadow follow you everywhere? LOL. Love and hugs.

Chris Green
Date: 4/13/2017 3:11:00 PM

Yeah, the darn thing won't leave me alone. I think its stalking me. :) Thanks Darlene. I am happy you got a chuckle out of this one.

Darren White

Date: 4/13/2017 2:29:00 PM

Ahahahahaha, when you turned it your back, what did he do?

Chris Green
Date: 4/13/2017 2:41:00 PM

It said, I knew you could write something other than love poetry. :) Thanks my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/13/2017 1:34:00 PM

- Always follow you ... not easy to get rid of :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 4/13/2017 1:38:00 PM

Yep, you're right...thank goodness for cloudy days. :) Thank you my friend.

Lin Lane

Date: 4/13/2017 1:22:00 PM

Oh that was not at all what I expected to read from you, Chris, but a delightful surprise.

Chris Green
Date: 4/13/2017 1:25:00 PM

I do try to post a surprise every once in a while. They can't all be love poems. :) Thanks so very much Lin.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/13/2017 12:28:00 PM

*giggles*

Chris Green
Date: 4/13/2017 1:01:00 PM

Thanks Maureen. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/13/2017 12:20:00 PM

Ha ha ha great humour:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green
Date: 4/13/2017 1:01:00 PM

Thanks Jan, yeah, my shadow is kind of sarcastic like that. :)