Hey a Sand Mohawk

Hey! I gave the sand pile a mohawk! I smile at age four

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/17/2021 8:15:00 PM

What a marvelous little story, Caren. And, he/she was so proud, too!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/18/2021 10:42:00 AM

They always are, and I am glad!

Marikate Kingston

Date: 9/17/2021 5:24:00 PM

In my kindergarten classroom a 5 year old whispered into my ear, "Don't tell my mommy, but my daddy smokes cigaretts in the bathtub!" Out of the mouths of babes. Kids say the darndest things. Yours is so, so cute !

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/18/2021 10:43:00 AM

They are HILARIOUS! I love them so much!

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/17/2021 9:03:00 AM

For sure, Caren; many large lessons about life, have come to me from much smaller sizes than myself. Great write!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/18/2021 10:43:00 AM

These little ones have such wise-ness!