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Hey, You There

You! Hey you! Yes, you! Duh, of course it's you! Are you even listening? I love you! My inner self have a sudden lose control My mind can't help it but mysteriously reminiscing the look you had You were beautiful, magnificent, a creation that has ever been My mind was a mess I thought it was a blessing from God after that hurtful event You came right in just in time Glancing here and there just to see you When the clock has strike 12 The feelings I had are drowning Over and over and over again The fact that you're my friend's One day, I hope these feelings will lead me Yet guiding me Hoping that your happiness will be my strength With love, your good friend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/16/2018 2:42:00 PM
Hello Mandy, I felt a lot of warmth when reading this poem.Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 1/23/2018 1:48:00 PM
Hello Mandy :) - It is a great pleasure to welcome you and thank you for your first contribution here on Poerty Soup - hugs // Sun :)
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Mandy Dale
Date: 1/25/2018 2:59:00 AM
It is a great pleasure for me to join too ^^ *hugs back*
Date: 1/22/2018 3:22:00 PM
Great first post Mandy.. Welcome to poetry soup..
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Mandy Dale
Date: 1/23/2018 10:38:00 AM
Thank you ^^
Date: 1/22/2018 11:04:00 AM
Mandy, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this marvelous community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I TOO am ready to enjoy and follow you and your poetry if you'd like :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup 2018 :) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Mandy Dale
Date: 1/23/2018 10:39:00 AM
Thank you for your warming welcome, Linda ^^

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