Hey, You There

You! Hey you! 
Yes, you! Duh, of course it's you! 
Are you even listening? 
I love you! 

My inner self have a sudden lose control
My mind can't help it but mysteriously reminiscing the look you had
You were beautiful, magnificent, a creation that has ever been

My mind was a mess
I thought it was a blessing from God after that hurtful event
You came right in just in time
Glancing here and there just to see you

When the clock has strike 12
The feelings I had are drowning
Over and over and over again
The fact that you're my friend's

One day, I hope these feelings will lead me
Yet guiding me 
Hoping that your happiness will be my strength
With love, your good friend.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 2:42 PM
Hello Mandy, I felt a lot of warmth when reading this poem.Welcome to Poetry Soup.
Andresen Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 1:48 PM
Hello Mandy :) - It is a great pleasure to welcome you and thank you for your first contribution here on Poerty Soup - hugs // Sun :)
Dale Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 2:59 AM
It is a great pleasure for me to join too ^^ *hugs back*
One Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Great first post Mandy.. Welcome to poetry soup..
Dale Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 10:38 AM
Thank you ^^
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January 22, 2018 at 11:04 AM
Mandy, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this marvelous community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I TOO am ready to enjoy and follow you and your poetry if you'd like :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup 2018 :) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Dale Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 10:39 AM
Thank you for your warming welcome, Linda ^^
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