Here's My Whine - Now Pass the Cheese

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Here is my whine, now pass along the cheese! My list is short on things that do not please. But greatest of those few that bring unease, is weather with a twirling, whirling breeze. A summer wind or one in winter freeze may call for me to search my bag and seize that item needed to then help appease my whining when I'm feeling ill at ease. You see, it has to do with the degrees it moves around stands up, or flows and flees... my hair that is, coiffured and firmly teased, in wind, will make you laugh, fall to your knees! Thank god for scarves and covers' expertise... the large bouffant with ties most times agrees to help confine my mane in windy sprees. So there's my whine, now pass along the cheese! Sandra M. Haight ~NA~ Premiere Contest: Here's My Whine, Now Pass the Cheese Sponsor: Philip Garcia Judged: 08/15/2016

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/6/2016 6:30:00 PM

A 7 for this skillfully-written, entertaining poem, Sandra! Janice

Sandra Haight
Date: 8/7/2016 10:46:00 PM

Thank you, Janice, and I am pleased this was entertaining for you :) I appreciate your nice comment and the 7! Hugs, Sandra

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/4/2016 2:55:00 PM

It's nice to see your humorous side Mrs Sandra. I can see where the wind might cause a lady some frustration. lol Alas, I am bald. Great poem Mrs Sandra.

Sandra Haight
Date: 8/7/2016 10:44:00 PM

Thank you, Daniel, I am pleased that you liked it. Yes, I can do humor when I wish :) I appreciate your visits and support as always. Sandra

Ronny Madonsela

Date: 8/4/2016 9:38:00 AM

Hi Sandra, great write , all the best for the contest.

Sandra Haight
Date: 8/7/2016 10:43:00 PM

Thank you so much, Ronny! I appreciate your visit and nice comments. Sandra

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 8/4/2016 9:12:00 AM

Love this poem Sandra because I can certainly relate even though my hair is short; some days looking like Phyllis Diller!:) G/L in the contest!:)

Sandra Haight
Date: 8/7/2016 10:42:00 PM

Hi, Cheryl, thanks for the nice visit and nice comments and support. Glad you can relate! Hugs, Sandra