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Here On This Beach

Here on this beach Harmonic footprints we stroll hand in hand Seashells and heartbeats alone on the sand Ocean breeze whispers and sandcastle dreams Twilight concertos on shimmered moon beams Slumbered horizons, a slow lullaby Stars made for wishing now tickle the sky Melodic waves gently kissing the shore Here on this beach I could not love you more Good night Soupers

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/30/2017 11:27:00 PM

Hi Chris!:))Very beautifully written romantic, dreamy,sweet, passionate, good night love poem Chris:)All just beautiful!Very captivating.Awesome!I truly loved it all! A 7 + + ! A fav too. For sure I'll continue reading more of your very beautiful poetry and (hearing) music, my friend Chris:))Best regards take good care of yourself! Spill ink!:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you always!:)) D

Chris Green
Date: 7/3/2017 9:02:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind thoughts on my poem. I am thrilled you liked this one.

Lenna Walker

Date: 4/7/2017 11:35:00 AM

So lovely you painted the scene. "stars made for wishing now tickle the sky" is an excellent speak of the stars. Very clever. Love the whole thing !!

Chris Green
Date: 4/7/2017 12:19:00 PM

Thanks so very much again Lenna for your kind thoughts. I appreciate your visit and nice comment.

John Hamilton

Date: 4/6/2017 1:23:00 PM

Your rhymes are amazing, just loved the flow and cadence of this write Chris! a7

Chris Green
Date: 4/6/2017 1:29:00 PM

Thank you John for your kind words today. I appreciate your visit my friend.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/5/2017 5:08:00 PM

This is a starlit treasure Chris. I came to see what you mentioned in your most recent post and so happy I did. This is a fave for me! 7 ; )

Chris Green
Date: 4/5/2017 5:25:00 PM

Thank you so very much Connie for your wonderful comment on my poem. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/5/2017 9:40:00 AM

Oops nearly missed this...Ahh..How beautiful ..It must be a piece of heaven..You must have an angel whispering ords into your ear...Whispering love..So magical.

Alexis Y.
Date: 4/5/2017 2:30:00 PM

Hi Chris, I agree , Charma's comment does sound like a poem. I'm so glad you listened to your muse and wrote a beautiful poem:-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 4/5/2017 9:47:00 AM

I was hoping you'd find this one my sweet friend. I am so thrilled you enjoyed this. An angel whispering in my ear? That sounds like a poem in itself, but the truth is, I let my imagination wander to places like this, daydreaming of strolling on a beach on a beautiful sunny island with someone very special by my side. I daydream a lot. Thank you again Charmaine, your comments are like daydreams to me.

Probir Gupta

Date: 4/5/2017 9:23:00 AM

A wonderful succession of images ... A very nice poem ...

Chris Green
Date: 4/5/2017 9:44:00 AM

Thank you so very much Probir.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/5/2017 8:33:00 AM

How could I not. Or better still how could any reader not like and enjoy this. Silly Chris. (lol) -- Smile --

Chris Green
Date: 4/5/2017 8:42:00 AM

Thanks again Lisa. :)

Just James

Date: 4/5/2017 8:07:00 AM

Certainly setting the scene! well done!

Chris Green
Date: 4/5/2017 8:27:00 AM

Thanks so very much my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/5/2017 8:05:00 AM

Parade of sparkling diamonds your verses my friend, Chris! A 7!

Chris Green
Date: 4/5/2017 8:26:00 AM

Thanks so very much Demetrios for your kind thoughts.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/5/2017 5:29:00 AM

Good Morning Chris. If I could give more than a 7 I would. Love and the ocean not to mention your Good Night Soupers is always a winning combination. Honestly, your words are lovely and poetic. Well done entirely.

Chris Green
Date: 4/5/2017 8:26:00 AM

Thank you Lisa for always being so kind to me. I was hoping you would like this sea-themed piece tonight. I appreciate your visits.

Darren White

Date: 4/5/2017 2:45:00 AM

This is such a Chris poem, it's so wonderfully you. I love its imagery, and I would honestly recongize it anywhere :) Beautiful, and see you in a bit, my friend.

Chris Green
Date: 4/5/2017 8:25:00 AM

Thanks so very much Darren. I am happy you liked this and found it recognizable as one of mine. That makes me smile.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 4/4/2017 10:32:00 PM

The stars may 'tickle the sky' but Chris, you tickle the heart and the soul. It's exquisite. Amitiés

Chris Green
Date: 4/5/2017 8:24:00 AM

Thank you so very much Anne-Marie. That is such a nice thing to say.

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/4/2017 9:11:00 PM

Lovely Chris, "slumbered horizons, a slow lullaby" my fav...

Chris Green
Date: 4/5/2017 8:24:00 AM

Thanks so much my friend.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 4/4/2017 6:45:00 PM

I love the line "Stars made for wishing now tickle the sky!" I think that must be a Chrisism. Sweet dreams.

Chris Green
Date: 4/5/2017 8:23:00 AM

Wow, thanks Sunlite. That's my first Chrisism. :) I appreciate your kindness my friend.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/4/2017 6:19:00 PM

beautiful and romantic ~*

Chris Green
Date: 4/5/2017 8:22:00 AM

Thank you so very much Eve.

Sara Ella

Date: 4/4/2017 6:05:00 PM

You know I meant "made" sorry about that. Although sometimes I "madly" look for shooting stars...

Chris Green
Date: 4/5/2017 8:22:00 AM

I kind of figured that's what you meant. :) But I do like your come back, madly looking for shooting stars. That makes sense to me.

Sara Ella

Date: 4/4/2017 6:03:00 PM

"Stars mad for wishing now tickle the sky" Chris - I LOVE THIS. Beautiful, romantic poem <3

Chris Green
Date: 4/5/2017 8:21:00 AM

Thank you so very much Sara, I am happy this one touched you.