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Here I Stand

Here I stand, staring aghast at the door Your leaving had come with no backward glance Have you not left through this same door before Have I not stood in this same lonesome trance Soulless and brooding, our home stands undead See how it prickles my skin as though chilled An emptiness lingers here in your stead My leaden heart feels redundant and stilled One dozen photos will hearten me not For grey shall be my demeanour today My fires shall burn dull and nevermore hot Since one door closing saw you go away A key in the lock, is it truly you Next week, it’s settled, I’ll come shopping too

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Date: 3/6/2025 10:44:00 AM
A wise and timeous solution to your problem Terry, taken at exactly the right moment! Be well and write on making us all have a good and necessary laugh. Blessings, Jennifer
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Terry Flood
Date: 3/6/2025 11:28:00 AM
Thanks, Jennifer. Thought about keeping it straight… not for long, but I thought about it ;-)
Date: 3/6/2025 3:09:00 AM
What a tease you are, Terry Flood!
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Terry Flood
Date: 3/6/2025 11:13:00 AM
Me? You can’t mean me, Ma’am ;-)
Date: 3/5/2025 1:25:00 PM
man, you fooled me, terry! here i am reading, thinking, "wow, terry's really on a serious kick right now. of course it's great, but i'm missing his humor" and then - pow! your last line just cracked me up! hah!
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Terry Flood
Date: 3/5/2025 3:08:00 PM
Thanks, Ilene. Tried hard not to give the game away. Was going to call this “Clingy” but decided to keep the twist secret. Still struggling to get the humor to flow. Hopefully something will just go “Ping!”
Date: 3/5/2025 12:45:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Date: 3/5/2025 3:10:00 PM
Thanks, Paula. A little twist at the end for no other reason than that it amused me ;-)

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