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Here, I Fly

See, How on My velvet Nose a tiny Butterfly sits and hisses my warm eyes. Soon, we'll fly freely like two fluffy clouds And kiss flowers That oft' dance in the breeze.
*A 1st Place Win* in the following contest (judged on Sept. 17, 2020) Picture 3 Sept. 7, 2020 Double Tetractys 2 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 9/22/2020 5:46:00 AM
Wonderful write, Congrats on your win..
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 9/23/2020 12:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph, for this great comment!!
Date: 9/17/2020 10:24:00 PM
A pretty picture painted....Congrats on your win Newton.
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 9/20/2020 7:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Carol, for this wonderfully sweet comment!!
Date: 9/17/2020 6:59:00 PM
Lovely write, Newton .. Congrats on your wonderful win :) <3 Hugs Eve..
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Date: 9/17/2020 7:35:00 PM
Thank you so much for, Even Roper, for the comment and for considering this piece for a placement in your contest!!
Date: 9/10/2020 11:50:00 AM
So delicate and pretty!
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 9/10/2020 11:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, Caren, for this sweet comment!!
Date: 9/8/2020 5:33:00 PM
Precious picture, Newton!
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 9/8/2020 8:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this sweet comment!!
Date: 9/7/2020 12:27:00 PM
Very pretty imagery!
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 9/7/2020 2:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim!!
Date: 9/7/2020 10:17:00 AM
well done Newton...and kiss flowers that oft' dance in the breeze has such a nice flow and image. Good luck in Eve's contest.
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 9/7/2020 10:48:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jeanne, for this immensely great comment!!
Date: 9/7/2020 9:22:00 AM
- A sweet poem, Newton :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 9/7/2020 9:56:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for your lovely comment!!
Date: 9/7/2020 7:31:00 AM
charming ~
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 9/7/2020 7:47:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line, for this sweet comment!!

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